Feb. 27, 2025
Since i was a child, i was obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute this live style. When i start grow up, this obssesion starts going to another way, when i start to study about this in school, so i star to see this subject in a otherwise. For me, everything it's cover the subjects History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty. I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, Victorian era, and so much things about the history about britsh royalty.
I have 15 years old, and i want to learn english now to have a great future beeing a law, and travel all word. Please correct my text.
Desde quando eu era criança, eu era obcecada por castelos, princesas, reis, rainhas, e tudo sobre esse estilo de vida. Quando eu comecei a crescer, essa obsessão começou a ir para outro caminho, quando eu comecei a estudar sobre isso na escola, então eu comecei a ver esse assunto de outra forma. Para mim, tudo que abrange o assunto de história, tem minha atenção, mas especificamente a história da realeza. eu amo tudo sobre a Princesa Diana, Imperatriz Sissi, era vitoriana, e muitas noutras coisas sobre a história sobre a realeza britânica.
Eu tenho 15 anos, e eu quero aprender inglês agora para ter um bom futuro sendo uma advogada, e viajar o mundo. Por favor corrijam meu texto.
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Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd about castles, princes, kings, queens, and all aboute thistheir livfe style.
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I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a law,yer and and travelling all over the world.
Please correct my text.
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For me, everything it'sthat covers the subjects History, haves my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
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I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeing a lawyer, and travel all word.
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1. A rule to remember: when a word starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, or u), then use "an" rather than "a"
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Saying that you "started to [verb]" so frequently is not needed. Here are some alternatives that will help your words flow more naturally:
A. "When I started growing up" -> "As I grew up"
B. "this obsession started going in another direction" -> "this obsession evolved" OR "this obsession changed direction"
C. "When I started to study" -> "While I was studying" OR "As I was studying"
For me, everything it's covern the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but especifically the history aboutof royalty.
1. There is no need to capitalize school subjects (with the exception of languages).
2. "especially" or "particularly" is a better choice than "specifically" because you are pointing out something you like more than usual.
I love everything about lLady Diana, eEmpress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof British royalty.
1. Capitalize noble/royal titles when they come before someone's name (Queen Mary).
2. The word "royalty" does not need to be capitalized in this sentence. However, if you write about the "Royal Family" then you would capitalize :)
I haveam 15 years old, and i. I want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and to travel allthe whole world.
1. Remember to always capitalize "I" in English. This is a difference between English and Portuguese (where "eu" is not capitalized).
2. Always capitalize the names of languages.
Please correct my text.
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Great job! I am also really interested in history. You could read books about the Royal Family in English to improve your language skills even more while also studying your favorite topic!
aAn obssession callingwith history
Since iI was a child, iI was obsessesd aboutwith castles, princes, kings, queens, and alleverything aboute this live festyle.
The word "I" is always capitalized.
Obsessed about -> obsessed with.
Lifestyle is one word.
When i startI groew up, this obssession starts going to another way, when i start to study about thised to change as I began to study it in school, so iI started to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently.
start -> started because you're talking about actions in the past.
start -> began to avoid repetition.
For me, everything it's covered by the subjects H of history, haves my attention, but specifically the history aboutof royalty.
You could also say "especially" instead of "specifically" but both are fine.
I love everything about ladyPrincess Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so much other things about the history aboutof british royalty.
She's most commonly called "Princess Diana".
I haveam 15 years old, and iI want to learn eEnglish now to have a great future beeingas a lawyer, and to travel allthe world.
To say your age, you can say "I am 15 years old" or in casual conversation just "I'm 15".
Please correct my text.
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Very good! Good luck with your English studies.
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In English, all words in a title are capitalized.
Since iI was a child, i wasI have been obssesd aboutsed with castles, princes, kings, queens, and all abouteeverything related to this live festyle.
When iI start growing up, this obssession starts going to another way, wevolved. When iI started to study about this in school, so i starI began to see this subject in a otherwisedifferently.
For me, everything it's coverrelated to the subjects of History, have my attention, but specifically the history about royalty.
I love everything about lady Diana, empress Sissi, the Victorian era, and so muchany things about the history about bof the British rRoyalty.
I have am15 years old, and iI want to learn english now to have a great future beeingas a law,yer and travel allling around the world.
Please correct my text.
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There were several minor errors that were probably just typos. Be careful about capitalization. For example, I is always in capitals in English.
a obssesion calling history
In English, all words in a title are capitalized.
1. A rule to remember: when a word starts with a vowel (a, e, i, o, or u), then use "an" rather than "a"
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