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alexwong2164

Feb. 22, 2021

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A normal life?!

Today all the restaurants call closed at 10pm.

In one table can allow four people sitting together instead two!

All the library, sport facility reopen again.

So, this week after work I will:

Go to library borrow books.

Go to gym workout.

Go to play badminton, table tennis…

Find another 3 friends have dinner together until 10pm.

But I still can’t drinking with my friends till midnight.

I also can’t go to other country to see my oversea friends!

If I am feeling happy now.

I will be crying with happy tear when our life really back to normal.

Means I can go to meet my friends in other countries.

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A normal life?!

Today all the restaurants call closed at 10pm.

IOn one table can allow, four people sittingcan sit together instead of two!

It's always "instead of X"

All the library,ies and sports facility ies are open again.

Reopen = open again

... are open again.
... are reopening.

So, this week after work I will:

Go to the library and borrow books.

Or go to the library to borrow some books

Go to gymthe gym and workout.

Go to pPlay badminton, and table tennis

Find an3 other 3 friends and have dinner together until 10pm.

Another = an other
Another friend = 1 other friend
Other friends = 2+ friends

But I still can’t drinking with my friends till midnight.

I also can’t go to another country to see my oversea friends!

Or other countries

See previous comment about other VS another

If I amwere feeling happy now.,

I willould be crying with happy tears when our life really gets back to normal.

MIt would means I can go to meevisit my friends in other countries.

Good job on the "other countries" here.

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Really enjoyed reading this. I hope you're able to visit your friends soon, and in the meantime, keep having voice and video calls with them.

A normal life?!


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Today all the restaurants call closed at 10pm.


Today all the restaurants call closed at 10pm.

In one table can allow four people sitting together instead two!


IOn one table can allow, four people sittingcan sit together instead of two!

It's always "instead of X"

All the library, sport facility reopen again.


All the library,ies and sports facility ies are open again.

Reopen = open again ... are open again. ... are reopening.

So, this week after work I will:


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Go to library borrow books.


Go to the library and borrow books.

Or go to the library to borrow some books

Go to gym workout.


Go to gymthe gym and workout.

Go to play badminton, table tennis…


Go to pPlay badminton, and table tennis

Find another 3 friends have dinner together until 10pm.


Find an3 other 3 friends and have dinner together until 10pm.

Another = an other Another friend = 1 other friend Other friends = 2+ friends

But I still can’t drinking with my friends till midnight.


But I still can’t drinking with my friends till midnight.

I also can’t go to other country to see my oversea friends!


I also can’t go to another country to see my oversea friends!

Or other countries

See previous comment about other VS another

If I am feeling happy now.


If I amwere feeling happy now.,

I will be crying with happy tear when our life really back to normal.


I willould be crying with happy tears when our life really gets back to normal.

Means I can go to meet my friends in other countries.


MIt would means I can go to meevisit my friends in other countries.

Good job on the "other countries" here.

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