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sato

Aug. 8, 2021

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a normal day

Today is my birthday. In the morning, my mom and dad both gave me red pockets to celebrate my birthday. We made a video call for several minutes as we are living in different cities. It gave me a sense of belonging having usual talk with them. At noon, I went out for lunch with a friend of mine. We ate hotpot together and it was really spicy.
Actually it was a normal day and not different from other days in my life.
I’m currently working as a product manager in an internet company. I have been thinking of having a career change. My job now is to design software applications for real estate brokers to help them make more deals. But the people I'm working with is not reliable. I am really tired of taking more responsibility.
The weekend is end and I don't want to go to work tomorrow. :(

Corrections

Today is my birthday.

It gave me a sense of belonging having usual talk with them.

when i talk to them it gives me a sense that i belong somewhere.

Actually it was a normal day and not different from other days in my life.

it was a regular day, nothing different

I have been thinking of having a career change.

i have been thinking of changing my career

The weekend is end and I don't want to go to work tomorrow.

its almost the end of the week.. i dont wish to go to work tomorrow

a normal day


Today is my birthday.


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In the morning, my mom and dad both gave me red pockets to celebrate my birthday.


We made a video call for several minutes as we are living in different cities.


It gave me a sense of belonging having usual talk with them.


It gave me a sense of belonging having usual talk with them.

when i talk to them it gives me a sense that i belong somewhere.

At noon, I went out for lunch with a friend of mine.


We ate hotpot together and it was really spicy.


Actually it was a normal day and not different from other days in my life.


Actually it was a normal day and not different from other days in my life.

it was a regular day, nothing different

I’m currently working as a product manager in an internet company.


I have been thinking of having a career change.


I have been thinking of having a career change.

i have been thinking of changing my career

My job now is to design software applications for real estate brokers to help them make more deals.


But the people I'm working with is not reliable.


I am really tired of taking more responsibility.


The weekend is end and I don't want to go to work tomorrow.


The weekend is end and I don't want to go to work tomorrow.

its almost the end of the week.. i dont wish to go to work tomorrow

:(


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