Jan. 15, 2020
(I'm learning a contracted form. If there's any word that can be contracted, please correct it.)
There're some cafes I use to study English after work. Yesterday I found the cafe I like the most was closed. To me, this cafe's a place with something like spiritual energy,
so my TOIEC score got higher and higher as I studied at this cafe. I went to another cafe I like the second but it was also closed. That cafe's bread was cheap but tasty. I went to a cafe chain reluctantly.
Coffee and sandwiches're not good but not cheap; the couple on the right of me started to have a quarrel; the two young girls behind me were speaking ill of someone; a man and a woman on the front-left were also bad-mouthing someone, so I felt helpless. The limit of my patience to stay there was 15 minutes. I'm now wandering around in search of a quiet cafe.
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There're some cafes I use to study English after work.
Yesterday, I found out that the cafe I like the most was closed.
To me, this cafe' is a place with something like a spiritual energy,so: my TOIEC score got higher and higher as I studied at this cafthere.
In this case, not using a contraction would sound better.
I went to another second cafe that I like the second, but it was also closed.
That cafe's bread wae bread from that cafe is cheap but tasty.
In this case, not using a contraction would sound better.
So I went to a cafe chainhain-cafe reluctantly.
Minor style point.
CThe coffee and sandwiches' are not good but notor cheap; t. The couple on the right of me started to have a quarrel; t. The two young girls behind me were speaking ill of someone; a. A man and a woman on the front-left were also bad-mouthing someone, s. So I felt helpless.
The limit of my patience toI could only stay there was 15 minutes.
This version is more to the point.
A Nice Cafe
(I'm learning a contracted formions. If there's are any words that can be contracted, please correct ithem.) There' are some cafes I usego to to study English after work.
Typically, you only contract "are" with pronouns, such as "you're" or "we're." I would never contract "there" and "are" when writing.
Yesterday, I found the cafe I like the mostat my favorite cafe was closed.
This sounds more natural.
To me, this cafe's a place with something like spiritual energy, so I felt like my TOIEC score got higher and higher as I studied at this cafe.
I went to another cafe, which I like the second best, but it was also closed.
That cafe's bread was cheap, but tasty.
Reluctantly, I went to a cafe chain reluctantly.
Your sentence is not wrong, but this sounds more natural.
CThe coffee and sandwiches' there are not good, but also not cheap; t. The couple ton the right of me started to have a quarrel; tfight. The two young girls behind me were speaking ill ofbadly about someone; a. A man and a woman on the front-left were also bad-mouthing someone, so I felt helpless.
My changes sound a bit more natural. Things like "quarrel" or "speaking ill" might be considered old-fashioned.
The limiI ran out of my patience to stayafter being there wasfor 15 minutes.
I'm now wandering around in search of a quiet cafe.
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(I'm learning a contracted form. If there's any word that can be contracted, please correct it.)There're some cafes I use to study English after work. (I'm learning Typically, you only contract "are" with pronouns, such as "you're" or "we're." I would never contract "there" and "are" when writing. (I'm learning |
Yesterday I found the cafe I like the most was closed. Yesterday, I found th This sounds more natural. Yesterday, I found out that the cafe I like the most was closed. |
To me, this cafe's a place with something like spiritual energy,so my TOIEC score got higher and higher as I studied at this cafe. To me, this cafe's a place with something like spiritual energy, so I felt like my TOIEC score got higher and higher as I studied at this cafe. To me, this cafe In this case, not using a contraction would sound better. |
I went to another cafe I like the second but it was also closed. I went to another cafe, which I like I went to a |
That cafe's bread was cheap but tasty. That cafe's bread was cheap, but tasty. Th In this case, not using a contraction would sound better. |
I went to a cafe chain reluctantly. Reluctantly, I went to a cafe chain Your sentence is not wrong, but this sounds more natural. So I went to a c Minor style point. |
Coffee and sandwiches're not good but not cheap; the couple on the right of me started to have a quarrel; the two young girls behind me were speaking ill of someone; a man and a woman on the front-left were also bad-mouthing someone, so I felt helpless.
My changes sound a bit more natural. Things like "quarrel" or "speaking ill" might be considered old-fashioned.
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The limit of my patience to stay there was 15 minutes.
This version is more to the point. |
I'm now wandering around in search of a quiet cafe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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