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Beha_lau

May 30, 2025

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A news about a large shit crashes near house's Johan

In norway, the big ship almost shops land close to house's Johan. Johan doesn't hear because hé slept well all night. His neighbor hear that. He rings the bell but no answer.
The ship is always stopping close to home. Companies and police, search a solution for move but for thé moment, it's impossible to move the ship. Unfornately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out. Only a wire breaks.

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A nNews about a large shitp crashesing near house's JohanJohan’s house

Definitely not a “shit”, ha ha!

In nNorway, the big ship almost shops land close to house's Johana large ship crashed close to Johan’s house.

Capital N for countries. Planes would land but not ships. The house is Johan’s so the ‘ goes after his name to show possession.

Johan doesn'idn’t hear anything because hée slept well all night.

His neighbour hear thatit though.

Most English speaking countries spell “neighbour” with a u but not the Americans! Past tense needed for hear.

He riangs the bell but got no answer.

Companies and police, search a solution for moveThe local authorities are searching for a solution to the problem but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the shipthe ship is stuck.

More natural sounding.

UnforFortunately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out no oil has leaked from the ship.

Only a wire breakshas broken.

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Well done. Keep it up.

A news about a large shitp crashes near house's JohanJohan’s house

In nNorway, thea big ship almost shopscrashed on land close to house's JohanJohan’s house.

Johan doesn'idn’t hear anything because hée slept well all night.

His neighbor hear thad about it.

He riangs the bell but got no answer.

The ship is always stoppingstill anchored close to homthe house.

Or "The ship often stops near the house."

Companies and police, are searching for a solution forto move it, but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the ship.

Unfortunately, the ship doesn't oil who comes outis leaking oil.

Only a wire breaksoke.

A nNews about a large shitp crashesing near house's JohanJohan’s house

Hilarious but u think you mean ship lol

In nNorway, thea big ship almost shopscrash lands close to house's JohanJohan’s house.

Johan doesn't hear it because hée slept well all night.

His neighbor hear thad it.

He riangs the bell but no answer.

Companies and police, search for a solution forto move it but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the ship.

Unfornately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out.

This sentence is grammatically correct but doesn’t make sense

Only a wire breaks.

A news about a large shit crashes near house's Johan


A nNews about a large shitp crashesing near house's JohanJohan’s house

Hilarious but u think you mean ship lol

A news about a large shitp crashes near house's JohanJohan’s house

A nNews about a large shitp crashesing near house's JohanJohan’s house

Definitely not a “shit”, ha ha!

In norway, the big ship almost shops land close to house's Johan.


In nNorway, thea big ship almost shopscrash lands close to house's JohanJohan’s house.

In nNorway, thea big ship almost shopscrashed on land close to house's JohanJohan’s house.

In nNorway, the big ship almost shops land close to house's Johana large ship crashed close to Johan’s house.

Capital N for countries. Planes would land but not ships. The house is Johan’s so the ‘ goes after his name to show possession.

Johan doesn't hear because hé slept well all night.


Johan doesn't hear it because hée slept well all night.

Johan doesn'idn’t hear anything because hée slept well all night.

Johan doesn'idn’t hear anything because hée slept well all night.

His neighbor hear that.


His neighbor hear thad it.

His neighbor hear thad about it.

His neighbour hear thatit though.

Most English speaking countries spell “neighbour” with a u but not the Americans! Past tense needed for hear.

He rings the bell but no answer.


He riangs the bell but no answer.

He riangs the bell but got no answer.

He riangs the bell but got no answer.

The ship is always stopping close to home.


The ship is always stoppingstill anchored close to homthe house.

Or "The ship often stops near the house."

Companies and police, search a solution for move but for thé moment, it's impossible to move the ship.


Companies and police, search for a solution forto move it but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the ship.

Companies and police, are searching for a solution forto move it, but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the ship.

Companies and police, search a solution for moveThe local authorities are searching for a solution to the problem but for thée moment, it's impossible to move the shipthe ship is stuck.

More natural sounding.

Unfornately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out.


Unfornately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out.

This sentence is grammatically correct but doesn’t make sense

Unfortunately, the ship doesn't oil who comes outis leaking oil.

UnforFortunately, the ship doesn't oil who comes out no oil has leaked from the ship.

Only a wire breaks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Only a wire breaksoke.

Only a wire breakshas broken.

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