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hsen2012

March 17, 2022

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A new logo

I am writing to you all regarding our logo change. It gives me great pleasure to announce that our company is going to change its logo. The main reason for changing our logo is that we think we should have a modern one to improve our reputation. We made a survey, and it showed us that most of our customers who like our products don't like our company's logo because they think it is old fashioned. So we decided to change it to keep our customers. We look forward to hearing from you about our new changes. Your opinion is so important to us.

Best wishes,

Hussein

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A new logo

I am writing to you all regarding our logo change.

It gives me great pleasure to announce that our company is going to change its logo.

The main reason for changing our logo is that we think we should have a modern one to improve our reputation.

We madeconducted a survey, and it showed us that most of our customers who like our products don't like our company's logo because they think it is old -fashioned.

So we decided to change it to keep our customers.

We look forward to hearing from you about our newthis changes.

"this change" sounds more natural. Also, there was only one change (not "changes").

Your opinion is so important to us.

Best wishes,

Hussein

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hsen2012

March 18, 2022

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A new logo


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I am writing to you all regarding our logo change.


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It gives me great pleasure to announce that our company is going to change its logo.


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The main reason for changing our logo is that we think we should have a modern one to improve our reputation.


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We made a survey, and it showed us that most of our customers who like our products don't like our company's logo because they think it is old fashioned.


We madeconducted a survey, and it showed us that most of our customers who like our products don't like our company's logo because they think it is old -fashioned.

So we decided to change it to keep our customers.


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We look forward to hearing from you about our new changes.


We look forward to hearing from you about our newthis changes.

"this change" sounds more natural. Also, there was only one change (not "changes").

Your opinion is so important to us.


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Best wishes,


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Hussein


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