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Uram

Dec. 21, 2021

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A new life

Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without "L").
To be fast describing myself I can say that I´m brunette, 1,60 meter tall and skinny.
I was born and raise up in two different countrys on latin america, because that it is dificult to say that I am from an only country.
A few years ago I take the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really confortable place.

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A new life

Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without the "L").

To be fastriefly describinge myself, I can say that I´'m a brunette, 1,skinny and 1.60 meter tall and skinny.

Usualmente se usa el punto ( . ) en lugar de una coma ( , ) para los decimales en inglés.

I was born and raise upd in two different countryies oin lLatin aAmerica, and because of that it is dificult to say that I am from an only countryname a single "country which I'm from".

Que yo sepa, la gente no "nace" en dos países simultaneamente (aunque lo de "raised in two countries" estaría bien :) )

A few years ago I takmade the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really conmfortable place.

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Bien escrito! :)

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Faizyrooma4

Dec. 22, 2021

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Oops, originalmente escribé mis correciones en inglés, pero me dio cuenta de que era de latinoamérica, y lo he corregido. X)

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Uram

Dec. 23, 2021

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Muchas gracias, se entiende perfectamente.

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Faizyrooma4

Dec. 23, 2021

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yay :D

Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without the "L").

To be fast describing myself I can sayA quick description of myself is that I´m a brunette, 1,60 meters tall and skinny.

Alternative: A quick introduction

Since you wrote your name in the earlier sentence, you could shorten this sentence to just say: "I'm a brunette, 1.6 meters tall, and skinny".

I was born and raised up in two different countryies oin lLatin aAmerica, because thatso it is difficult to say that I am from an only country.

A few years ago, I takmade the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really conmfortable place.

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Nice work Aura without the "L"!

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Uram

Dec. 22, 2021

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Thank you XD

A new life


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Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without "L").


Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without the "L").

Hi, my name is Aura (Not Laura, Aura, without the "L").

To be fast describing myself I can say that I´m brunette, 1,60 meter tall and skinny.


To be fast describing myself I can sayA quick description of myself is that I´m a brunette, 1,60 meters tall and skinny.

Alternative: A quick introduction Since you wrote your name in the earlier sentence, you could shorten this sentence to just say: "I'm a brunette, 1.6 meters tall, and skinny".

To be fastriefly describinge myself, I can say that I´'m a brunette, 1,skinny and 1.60 meter tall and skinny.

Usualmente se usa el punto ( . ) en lugar de una coma ( , ) para los decimales en inglés.

I was born and raise up in two different countrys on latin america, because that it is dificult to say that I am from an only country.


I was born and raised up in two different countryies oin lLatin aAmerica, because thatso it is difficult to say that I am from an only country.

I was born and raise upd in two different countryies oin lLatin aAmerica, and because of that it is dificult to say that I am from an only countryname a single "country which I'm from".

Que yo sepa, la gente no "nace" en dos países simultaneamente (aunque lo de "raised in two countries" estaría bien :) )

A few years ago I take the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really confortable place.


A few years ago, I takmade the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really conmfortable place.

A few years ago I takmade the decision to quit my job and change my profession, and now I work in a really conmfortable place.

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