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galoarellano1987

Nov. 13, 2024

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A new day with great experiences

Today was a day with many experiences for me. When I woke up, at the morning, I felt a bit strange, because today was my seventh day with medical rest. By a moment, I thought today will be a strange and nervous day, however as the day progressed I began to feel more confident.

For example, I went out to the market because I needed to buy some groceries. Although I took my son to his psycollogist class. It was a great time, because while I waitting for Sebastian I can practice my speaking on the Lingo App.

Also, I took advantage on the morning to move forward with a new project. I hope the new project will be successfull.

Today I realized Sebastian love to use the headphones and I think is a good way for working his attention and concentration.

Thanks for reading and helping me to improve.

God bless you.

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A nNew dDay with gGreat eExperiences

Give important words in a title a capital letter.

Today was a day with many great experiences for me.

Sounds better if you say what kind of experiences: good, bad etc. and take the "for me" off the end.

When I woke up, at the morningIn the morning, when I woke up, I felt a bit strange, because today was my seventh day withof medical rest.

IN the morning not AT. "seventh day of medical rest" not "seventh day with medical rest".

ByFor a moment, I thought today willould be a strange and nervous day,; however, as the day progressed I began to feel more confident.

The expression is "for a moment". "would be" you are imagining what the day is like rather than it definitely being that way.

For example, I went out to the market because I needed to buy some groceries.

Although, I also took my son to his psychollogisty class.

A "psychologist" is a person. The subject is "psychology". Or did you mean "Although, I also took my son to his psychologist."?

It was a great use of time, because while I was waitting for Sebastian I canould practicse my speaking on the Lingo App.

Past progressive form needed i.e. "I was waiting". In British English the verb is "to practise", in American English "to practice". Not sure what kind of English you are going for.

Also, I took advantage onf the morning to move forward with a new project.

I hope the new project will be successfull.

Today I realized Sebastian loves to use the headphones and I think it is a good way ofor working because it improves his attention and concentration.

"loves" is third person singular form in present tense. Don't need "the" before "headphones" as you are talking about "headphones" in general not a specific set of headphones.

Thanks for reading and helping me to improve.

God bless you.

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Good stuff. Mostly correct.

A new day with great experiences


A nNew dDay with gGreat eExperiences

Give important words in a title a capital letter.

Today was a day with many experiences for me.


Today was a day with many great experiences for me.

Sounds better if you say what kind of experiences: good, bad etc. and take the "for me" off the end.

When I woke up, at the morning, I felt a bit strange, because today was my seventh day with medical rest.


When I woke up, at the morningIn the morning, when I woke up, I felt a bit strange, because today was my seventh day withof medical rest.

IN the morning not AT. "seventh day of medical rest" not "seventh day with medical rest".

For example, I went out to the market because I needed to buy some groceries.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although I took my son to his psycollogist class.


Although, I also took my son to his psychollogisty class.

A "psychologist" is a person. The subject is "psychology". Or did you mean "Although, I also took my son to his psychologist."?

It was a great time, because while I waitting for Sebastian I can practice my speaking on the Lingo App.


It was a great use of time, because while I was waitting for Sebastian I canould practicse my speaking on the Lingo App.

Past progressive form needed i.e. "I was waiting". In British English the verb is "to practise", in American English "to practice". Not sure what kind of English you are going for.

Also, I took advantage on the morning to move forward with a new project.


Also, I took advantage onf the morning to move forward with a new project.

By a moment, I thought today will be a strange and nervous day, however as the day progressed I began to feel more confident.


ByFor a moment, I thought today willould be a strange and nervous day,; however, as the day progressed I began to feel more confident.

The expression is "for a moment". "would be" you are imagining what the day is like rather than it definitely being that way.

I hope the new project will be successfull.


I hope the new project will be successfull.

Today I realized Sebastian love to use the headphones and I think is a good way for working his attention and concentration.


Today I realized Sebastian loves to use the headphones and I think it is a good way ofor working because it improves his attention and concentration.

"loves" is third person singular form in present tense. Don't need "the" before "headphones" as you are talking about "headphones" in general not a specific set of headphones.

Thanks for reading and helping me to improve.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

God bless you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By a moment, I though today will be a strange and nervous day, however as the day progressed I began to feel more confident.


Thanks for reading and help me to improve.


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