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July 18, 2022

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A new concept of art

The Bauhaus features a new radical concept of art. There is no significative difference between art and craft. Therefore, would-be artists should show a special skill in their fields being the studio the centre of their universe. The Bauhaus had a very pragmatic approach and its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-know motto: “Form follows function”. The idea of minimalism that nordic design has contributed to popularize over the last decades is quite palpable in this context and one can ask himself whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.

Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement: the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works. Besides Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth century, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus

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A new concept of art

The Bauhaus (context of what this is) features a new radical concept of art.

Is it a person? A website? This needs to be clarified through “The Bauhaus, (a movie/a museum) features…”

There is no significantive difference between art and craft.

Art and craft is very vague. In English we have something called “Arts and Crafts” (slang for making art for children).

Therefore, would-be artists should show a specialparticular skill in their fields applications, (being as the studio is the centre of their universe!).

Cohesiveness and style!

The Bauhaus hads a very pragmatic approach and its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-known motto: “Form follows function”.

The idea of minimalism that nordic design has contributed to, which has been popularizesed over the last decades, is quite palpable in this context, and one can ask hithemselfves whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.

Themselves = singular: English is not male/female; should always be they.

Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement:, for example, the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works.

Besides Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth centurytwentieth century as the most integral/important architects, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus

More sophisticated vocabulary, more focus.

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Very sophisticated well done !

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jfartogra

July 19, 2022

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Thanks a lot Frannie!

A new concept of art

The Bauhaus features a new radical new conception of art.

Los hablantes de inglés usan los artículos definidos con menor frecuencia que los hablantes de las lenguas romances. Usualmente evitamos artículos coando usamos los sustantivos propios.

There is no significantive difference between art and craft.

Therefore, would-be artists should show a special skill in their fields being, with their studio serving as the centrer of their universe.

The Bauhaus had a very pragmatic approach and i. Its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-known motto: “Form follows function”.

The idea of minimalism that nNordic design has contributed to popularized over the last several decades is quite palpable in this context and o. One can ask himself whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.

Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement:. For example, the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works.

BesidesMoreover, Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe, and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth century, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus

¡La coma en serie puede estár un poco controversial aún entre unos hablantes de inglés! Pero lo recomendo para los estudiantes de inglés. Es más claro.

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Good work! This flows and is always clear!

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jfartogra

July 19, 2022

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Thanks a lot for the corrections!

A new concept of art


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The Bauhaus features a new radical concept of art.


The Bauhaus features a new radical new conception of art.

Los hablantes de inglés usan los artículos definidos con menor frecuencia que los hablantes de las lenguas romances. Usualmente evitamos artículos coando usamos los sustantivos propios.

The Bauhaus (context of what this is) features a new radical concept of art.

Is it a person? A website? This needs to be clarified through “The Bauhaus, (a movie/a museum) features…”

There is no significative difference between art and craft.


There is no significantive difference between art and craft.

There is no significantive difference between art and craft.

Art and craft is very vague. In English we have something called “Arts and Crafts” (slang for making art for children).

Therefore, would-be artists should show a special skill in their fields being the studio the centre of their universe.


Therefore, would-be artists should show a special skill in their fields being, with their studio serving as the centrer of their universe.

Therefore, would-be artists should show a specialparticular skill in their fields applications, (being as the studio is the centre of their universe!).

Cohesiveness and style!

The Bauhaus had a very pragmatic approach and its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-know motto: “Form follows function”.


The Bauhaus had a very pragmatic approach and i. Its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-known motto: “Form follows function”.

The Bauhaus hads a very pragmatic approach and its whole philosophy has been summarized in a very well-known motto: “Form follows function”.

The idea of minimalism that nordic design has contributed to popularize over the last decades is quite palpable in this context and one can ask himself whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.


The idea of minimalism that nNordic design has contributed to popularized over the last several decades is quite palpable in this context and o. One can ask himself whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.

The idea of minimalism that nordic design has contributed to, which has been popularizesed over the last decades, is quite palpable in this context, and one can ask hithemselfves whether Scandinavians did not borrow the concept from the Bauhaus itself.

Themselves = singular: English is not male/female; should always be they.

Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement: the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works.


Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement:. For example, the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works.

Several renowned artists can be listed as part of the movement:, for example, the painters Kandinsky and Klee left behind important theoretical works.

Besides Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth century, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus


BesidesMoreover, Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe, and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth century, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus

¡La coma en serie puede estár un poco controversial aún entre unos hablantes de inglés! Pero lo recomendo para los estudiantes de inglés. Es más claro.

Besides Walter Gropius, Mies Van der Rohe and Le Corbusier, belonging to the most important architects of the twentieth centurytwentieth century as the most integral/important architects, were reponsible for creating some paradigmatic works of the Bauhaus

More sophisticated vocabulary, more focus.

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