Kindred Spirit

March 26, 2025

A new challenge

I am going to do new challenge about my job in this April. I get a bit nervous because I like simple day and I don't like change. but, I think it will be opportunity I will be better. So, I decided I accepted this I will make it better.

Corrections

A new challenge

I am going to dotake on a new challenge about my job inin my career this April.

We don't really say "DO a challenge" but rather "undertake a challenge" "take on a challenge"

Rather than "about my job" (this sounds like "to do with my job") maybe "in my career"

We don't say "IN this April" but just "this April"

I getThis makes me a bit nervous because I like simple days and I don't like change.

"I get a bit nervous" is grammatically right, but it would sound more natural to clarify that the challenge makes you nervous.

Maybe "easy" instead of "simple"?

but, I think it will be an opportunity I will beto get better.

"To get" because it is an opportunity to help you travel/move towards later BEING better.

So, I decided Ito accepted this I will make ito get better.¶
So, I accepted this to ge
t better.

Either of the sentences above would work.
Saying "to get better" ties together the sentence; otherwise it sounds like two separate sentences.

Feedback

Good work, some of these tenses are tricky!

Kindred Spirit

March 27, 2025

Thank you very for your explanation and many alternative ways. I never forget them.

Kindred Spirit

March 27, 2025

Your explanation is easy to understand✨

I am going to do new challenge about my job in this April.


I am going to dotake on a new challenge about my job inin my career this April.

We don't really say "DO a challenge" but rather "undertake a challenge" "take on a challenge" Rather than "about my job" (this sounds like "to do with my job") maybe "in my career" We don't say "IN this April" but just "this April"

I get a bit nervous because I like simple day and I don't like change.


I getThis makes me a bit nervous because I like simple days and I don't like change.

"I get a bit nervous" is grammatically right, but it would sound more natural to clarify that the challenge makes you nervous. Maybe "easy" instead of "simple"?

A new challenge


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

but, I think it will be opportunity I will be better.


but, I think it will be an opportunity I will beto get better.

"To get" because it is an opportunity to help you travel/move towards later BEING better.

So, I decided I accepted this I will make it better.


So, I decided Ito accepted this I will make ito get better.¶
So, I accepted this to ge
t better.

Either of the sentences above would work. Saying "to get better" ties together the sentence; otherwise it sounds like two separate sentences.

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