March 26, 2025
I am going to do new challenge about my job in this April. I get a bit nervous because I like simple day and I don't like change. but, I think it will be opportunity I will be better. So, I decided I accepted this I will make it better.
A new challenge
I am going to dotake on a new challenge about my job inin my career this April.
We don't really say "DO a challenge" but rather "undertake a challenge" "take on a challenge"
Rather than "about my job" (this sounds like "to do with my job") maybe "in my career"
We don't say "IN this April" but just "this April"
I getThis makes me a bit nervous because I like simple days and I don't like change.
"I get a bit nervous" is grammatically right, but it would sound more natural to clarify that the challenge makes you nervous.
Maybe "easy" instead of "simple"?
but, I think it will be an opportunity I will beto get better.
"To get" because it is an opportunity to help you travel/move towards later BEING better.
So, I decided Ito accepted this I will make ito get better.¶
So, I accepted this to get better.
Either of the sentences above would work.
Saying "to get better" ties together the sentence; otherwise it sounds like two separate sentences.
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Good work, some of these tenses are tricky!
A new challenge This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I am going to do new challenge about my job in this April. I am going to We don't really say "DO a challenge" but rather "undertake a challenge" "take on a challenge" Rather than "about my job" (this sounds like "to do with my job") maybe "in my career" We don't say "IN this April" but just "this April" |
I get a bit nervous because I like simple day and I don't like change.
"I get a bit nervous" is grammatically right, but it would sound more natural to clarify that the challenge makes you nervous. Maybe "easy" instead of "simple"? |
but, I think it will be opportunity I will be better. but, I think it will be an opportunity "To get" because it is an opportunity to help you travel/move towards later BEING better. |
So, I decided I accepted this I will make it better. So, I decided Either of the sentences above would work. Saying "to get better" ties together the sentence; otherwise it sounds like two separate sentences. |
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