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galoarellano1987

March 26, 2025

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Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of US. To be honest, I was not afraid and I had the decition of speak with them.
They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recomendation about the safes and unsafes places.
I think that 10 years ago my city was the most security in the world but with new politicians rules the situation changed for bad.

I miss the time when I walked with security in my city. I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon return to ours homes, meanwhile its necessary to pray and ask for God to cares of us.

The conversation with the tourist was funny and facing, because I can to test my real english level. I can understand at least the 90% of meeting, although I must to confess when they speak very faster it turns difficult to understand at all.

Thanks for reading me.

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Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of USAmericans.

The noun for people from the US is Americans. Geographically this seems a little silly, I know, like in other languages similar words mean anyone from the continent, including Canadians, Mexicans, Brazilians, etc., but Americans have called themselves that for so long that the term is only used for people from the US. If we want to talk about multiple countries, we would say North Americans, Central Americans, South Americans etc. (but not Southern Americans, that means people from Southern USA).

To be honest, I was not afraid and I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

Not quite clear what you mean my decition, assuming it's a misspelling of decision

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recommendation about the safes and unsafes places.

adjectives aren't plural. Your spellcheck won't complain about "safes", but "safes" is a different word than the safe you want. ("safes" are the secure boxes or rooms for storing valuables)

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitye in the world but with new politicians rules the situation has changed for badthe worse.

I miss the time when I walked with securityconfidence in my city.

While there are some contexts where you can describe security as an emotion, it's kind of a niche use case. In this kind of sentence, we'd normally talk about the emotion we feel about the security. "Confidence" is a common way to describe the feeling of not having to worry about safety.

I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedonm return to ours homes, but meanwhile it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

The conversation with the tourist was funny and facrevealing, because I can to test my real english level.

Took a guess as to what you intended by "facing" here

I can understand at least the 90% of meetthe meaning, although I must to confess that when they speak very faster it turnbecomes difficult to understand anything at all.

Thanks for reading mey post.

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Pretty good!

A New Challenge

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of people from the US.

To be honest, I was non't afraid and, so I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

They awere on vacations in my city, and I was giving athem recommendations about the safes and unsafes places.

I think thaabout 10 years ago my city was the most securitysafest in the world, but with new politicians rules the situation has changed for badthe worse.

I miss the time when I walked with securitcould walk safely in my city.

I have faith, that one day my city will change again, and the peace and freedonm will return to ours homes, meanwhile. In the meantime, it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

The conversation with the tourists was funny and facinguseful, because I canwas able to test my reactual eEnglish level.

I wasn't sure what you meant by "facing" so I replaced it.

I canould understand at least the 90% of meetingwhat they said, although I musthave to confess, when they speakoke very faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand them at all.

Thanks for reading me.

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Congrats on having speaking with natives!

A New Challenge

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple ofrom the US.

To be honest, I was not afraid and I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recommendations about the safes and unsafes place areas.

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitysafest in the world but with new politicians' rules, the situation changed for badthe worse.

I miss the time when I walked with security inould walk safely around my city.

I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon will return to ours homes, m. Meanwhile it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

The conversation with the tourists was funny and facing, because I cangot to test my real eEnglish level.

I'm not sure what you meant by 'facing'

I can understanood at least the 90% of meetingwhat they said, although I must to confess that when they speak veryoke faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand anything at all.

Thanks for reading me.

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Well written. And congrats for being brave enough to talk to the tourists in English!

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of people from the US.

To be honest, I was not afraid and I had the decitermination tof speak with them.

Im not sure what was intended by “decition”. Maybe “I made the decision to speak with them”?

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving agave recomendations about the safes and unsafes places.

They are on one vacation currently, even if it’s multiple people.

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitye in the world but with the new politicians rules the situation has changed for badworse.

I miss the time when I walked with securitaround safely in my city.

I have faith, that one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon return to ours homes, m. Meanwhile its necessary to pray and ask for God to cares of us.

The conversation with the tourist was funny and facing, because I can toould test my reactual english level.

I canould understand at least the 90% of meettheir meaning, although I must to confess when they speak veryoke faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand them at all.

Thanks for reading me.

Feedback

Great work!

A New Challenge


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Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of US.


Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of people from the US.

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple ofrom the US.

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of people from the US.

Today is a great day so far, because I had the opportunity to talk with a couple of USAmericans.

The noun for people from the US is Americans. Geographically this seems a little silly, I know, like in other languages similar words mean anyone from the continent, including Canadians, Mexicans, Brazilians, etc., but Americans have called themselves that for so long that the term is only used for people from the US. If we want to talk about multiple countries, we would say North Americans, Central Americans, South Americans etc. (but not Southern Americans, that means people from Southern USA).

To be honest, I was not afraid and I had the decition of speak with them.


To be honest, I was not afraid and I had the decitermination tof speak with them.

Im not sure what was intended by “decition”. Maybe “I made the decision to speak with them”?

To be honest, I was not afraid and I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

To be honest, I was non't afraid and, so I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

To be honest, I was not afraid and I hmade the decitsion tof speak with them.

Not quite clear what you mean my decition, assuming it's a misspelling of decision

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recomendation about the safes and unsafes places.


They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving agave recomendations about the safes and unsafes places.

They are on one vacation currently, even if it’s multiple people.

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recommendations about the safes and unsafes place areas.

They awere on vacations in my city, and I was giving athem recommendations about the safes and unsafes places.

They are on vacations in my city, and I was giving a recommendation about the safes and unsafes places.

adjectives aren't plural. Your spellcheck won't complain about "safes", but "safes" is a different word than the safe you want. ("safes" are the secure boxes or rooms for storing valuables)

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most security in the world but with new politicians rules the situation changed for bad.


I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitye in the world but with the new politicians rules the situation has changed for badworse.

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitysafest in the world but with new politicians' rules, the situation changed for badthe worse.

I think thaabout 10 years ago my city was the most securitysafest in the world, but with new politicians rules the situation has changed for badthe worse.

I think that 10 years ago my city was the most securitye in the world but with new politicians rules the situation has changed for badthe worse.

I miss the time when I walked with security in my city.


I miss the time when I walked with securitaround safely in my city.

I miss the time when I walked with security inould walk safely around my city.

I miss the time when I walked with securitcould walk safely in my city.

I miss the time when I walked with securityconfidence in my city.

While there are some contexts where you can describe security as an emotion, it's kind of a niche use case. In this kind of sentence, we'd normally talk about the emotion we feel about the security. "Confidence" is a common way to describe the feeling of not having to worry about safety.

I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon return to ours homes, meanwhile its necessary to pray and ask for God to cares of us.


I have faith, that one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon return to ours homes, m. Meanwhile its necessary to pray and ask for God to cares of us.

I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedon will return to ours homes, m. Meanwhile it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

I have faith, that one day my city will change again, and the peace and freedonm will return to ours homes, meanwhile. In the meantime, it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

I have faith, one day my city will change again and the peace and freedonm return to ours homes, but meanwhile it's necessary to pray and ask for God to take cares of us.

The conversation with the tourist was funny and facing, because I can to test my real english level.


The conversation with the tourist was funny and facing, because I can toould test my reactual english level.

The conversation with the tourists was funny and facing, because I cangot to test my real eEnglish level.

I'm not sure what you meant by 'facing'

The conversation with the tourists was funny and facinguseful, because I canwas able to test my reactual eEnglish level.

I wasn't sure what you meant by "facing" so I replaced it.

The conversation with the tourist was funny and facrevealing, because I can to test my real english level.

Took a guess as to what you intended by "facing" here

I can understand at least the 90% of meeting, although I must to confess when they speak very faster it turns difficult to understand at all.


I canould understand at least the 90% of meettheir meaning, although I must to confess when they speak veryoke faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand them at all.

I can understanood at least the 90% of meetingwhat they said, although I must to confess that when they speak veryoke faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand anything at all.

I canould understand at least the 90% of meetingwhat they said, although I musthave to confess, when they speakoke very faster it turnsbecame difficult to understand them at all.

I can understand at least the 90% of meetthe meaning, although I must to confess that when they speak very faster it turnbecomes difficult to understand anything at all.

Thanks for reading me.


Thanks for reading me.

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