Sept. 30, 2021
I am so happy that I am having 7 free days! I have made a plan with my friend, we will go to a beach and stay there for 2 days. We also will visit Auntie De together, and then have a walk on the field yards. I am anticipating it very much!
In the morning, I went to my clean zone, there were only three boys there. It was 5 minutes earlier before the class. What's worse, three boys absent. All the five boys were being punished this week, but they did really badly. So the punishment would be continued for the whole October. And two of them whose mobile phone were kept by me wouldn't get the phones back as I said before. I also told them I would notice the incident in Parents chat group.
During the class, I mentioned the word "make up." Then some boys laughed at the girls who made up two days ago. I told them that they shouldn't behaved like that because it was very impolite. If what other people did didn't disturb you, you should be quiet. Judging people by their appearence or body shape or anything like this was very impolite. People always blame the mothers didn't take their responsibility to teach their children the moral standards, but it was quite strict with the women. Where were the fathers? Didn't they do anything? So the girl should be more independent, only then they could escape the harm from bad marriage. A boy asked whether I wanted to start a revolution, as the society was traditional, they couldn't do anything. I told them they could be kinder with their families now and the fucture.
At noon, a mother asked me to give the phone back to her son. She was so rude that I told what her son did at school, and it was a punishment of not getting the phone back. After school, a boy came into my house with his dad. The father told me his son want the phone back. I told him the situation and blamed him shouldn't help his son to do this. He said his son should be punished.
I really think the parents never truly care about their children. They just think that money is everything. The manner and mental world are unimportant.
A National Vacation!
I am so happy that I am having 7 free dayshave 7 days off!
I have made a plans with my friend, we will go to a beach and stay there for 2 days.
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In English we usually only refer to people who are actually our aunts as Aunt/Auntie, it's not like 阿姨.
I am anticipatinglooking forward to it very much!
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"As I said before" = 我以前说我不会还给他们他们的手机,现在再说一遍。"As I had said (promised) before" = 我以前说我会把手机还给他们,现在就说不会。
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During the class, I mentioned the word "make up."
Then some boys laughed at the girls who mhade put on makeup two days ago.
Makeup is mostly used as one word, if you really wanted, though it would be outdated and formal, you could say "who had made their faces up"
I told them that they shouldn't behaved like that because it was very impolite.
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Where were the fathers?
Didn't they do anything?
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A boy asked whether I wanted to start a revolution, as the society was traditional, and they felt they couldn't do anything.
I told them they could be kinder with their families now and in the fucture.
At noon, a mother asked me to give ther son's phone back to her sonim.
She was so rude that I told what her son did at school, and it was athat the punishment of not getting thewas that I took his phone backaway.
After school, a boy came into my house with his dad.
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He said his son should be punished.
I really think the parents never truly care about their children.
They just think that money is everything.
The manners and mental worldattitude of their children are unimportant.
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Excited for your vacation! Nice writing!
A National Vacation! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I am so happy that I am having 7 free days! I am so happy that I |
I have made a plan with my friend, we will go to a beach and stay there for 2 days. I have made |
We also will visit Auntie De together, and then have a walk on the field yards. We also will visit my Auntie De together, and then have a walk In English we usually only refer to people who are actually our aunts as Aunt/Auntie, it's not like 阿姨. |
I am anticipating it very much! I am |
In the morning, I went to my clean zone, there were only three boys there. In the morning, I went to my cl |
It was 5 minutes earlier before the class.
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What's worse, three boys absent. What's worse, three boys were absent, too. |
All the five boys were being punished this week, but they did really badly. All The way it's currently written, it's implied that there are 3 boys in your class who were at the zone, another 3 boys who were absent, but also just 5 boys in your class altogether. |
So the punishment would be continued for the whole October.
Connect to previous sentence. |
And two of them whose mobile phone were kept by me wouldn't get the phones back as I said before.
"As I said before" = 我以前说我不会还给他们他们的手机,现在再说一遍。"As I had said (promised) before" = 我以前说我会把手机还给他们,现在就说不会。 |
I also told them I would notice the incident in Parents chat group. I also told them I would |
During the class, I mentioned the word "make up." During the class, I mentioned the word "make |
Then some boys laughed at the girls who made up two days ago. Then some boys laughed at the girls who Makeup is mostly used as one word, if you really wanted, though it would be outdated and formal, you could say "who had made their faces up" |
I told them that they shouldn't behaved like that because it was very impolite. I told them that they shouldn't behave |
If what other people did didn't disturb you, you should be quiet. If what other people d |
Judging people by their appearence or body shape or anything like this was very impolite. Judging people by their appear |
People always blame the mothers didn't take their responsibility to teach their children the moral standards, but it was quite strict with the women. People always blame |
Where were the fathers? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Didn't they do anything? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
So the girl should be more independent, only then they could escape the harm from bad marriage.
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A boy asked whether I wanted to start a revolution, as the society was traditional, they couldn't do anything. A boy asked whether I wanted to start a revolution, as the society was traditional, and they felt they couldn't do anything. |
I told them they could be kinder with their families now and the fucture. I told them they could be kinder with their families now and in the fu |
At noon, a mother asked me to give the phone back to her son. At noon, a mother asked me to give |
She was so rude that I told what her son did at school, and it was a punishment of not getting the phone back. She was so rude that I told what her son did at school, and |
After school, a boy came into my house with his dad. After school, a boy came into my house with his dad. Into your house?? 是不是有点侵犯自己的边界嘛 |
The father told me his son want the phone back. The father told me his son want |
I told him the situation and blamed him shouldn't help his son to do this. I told |
He said his son should be punished. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I really think the parents never truly care about their children. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
They just think that money is everything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The manner and mental world are unimportant. The manners and |
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