June 17, 2021
A Movie Review
The last movie I saw was My Octopus Teacher which won the Oscar for best documentary this year.
It’s about a South African filmmaker who after filming and working with a tribe in the heart of Africa feels a strong call to reconnect with nature. So, he turns to the ocean and starts to go free dive regularly.
He becomes obsessed with an octopus and decides to visit and film the octopus’ life and routine for a year.
They start to bond as he establishes this connection with this marine animal without interfering in its habitat or routine. Trust me you can learn so many things from observing closely.
Did you know that an octopus' lifespan is about one year?
It’s very short.
The movie is fascinating and very moving. So, if you are an emotional person like I am, I advise you to have your Kleenex box at hand. You will definitely need it.
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All of the major words of a title are typically capitalized. Additionally, capitalize the first word.
The last movie I saw was a documentary that, My Octopus Teacher, won the Oscar for best documentary this year.
There is not anything explicitly incorrect with this sentence but for clarity and conciseness I would combine this sentence and the next sentence as well.
It’s about a South African filmmaker who after filming and working with a tribe in the heart of Africa feels a strong call to reconnect with nature.
It’s called My teacher octopusOctopus Teacher.
I would delete this if you take my recommendation for the previous sentence. Otherwise make sure the entire title is capitalized.
So, he turns to the ocean and starts to go free divinge regularly.
This makes it flow better
He becomes obsessed with an octopus and decides to visit and film the octopus’ life and routine for a year.
Did you know that an octopus' lifespan is about one year?
He just follows it around and films its daily life.
I would delete this as you said something very similar two sentences previously
It’s very short.
And tTrust me you can learn so many things from observing closely.
typically we don't start sentences with "And"
The movie is fascinating and very moving.
So, if you are an emotional person like I am, I advise you to have your Kleenex box at hand.
You will definitely need it.
Feedback
Nice! just try to be more concise with the words you choose at it makes your message more clear.
June 17, 2021
Thank you so much for your feedback! :)
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A movie review A All of the major words of a title are typically capitalized. Additionally, capitalize the first word. |
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The last movie I saw was a documentary that won the Oscar for best documentary this year. The last movie I saw There is not anything explicitly incorrect with this sentence but for clarity and conciseness I would combine this sentence and the next sentence as well. |
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It’s called My teacher octopus. It’s called My I would delete this if you take my recommendation for the previous sentence. Otherwise make sure the entire title is capitalized. |
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It’s about a South African filmmaker who after filming and working with a tribe in the heart of Africa feels a strong call to reconnect with nature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, he turns to the ocean and starts to go free diving regularly. So, he turns to the ocean and starts to This makes it flow better |
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He becomes obsessed with an octopus and decides to visit and film the octopus’ life and routine for a year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They start to bond as he establishes this connection with this marine animal without interfering in its habitat or routine. |
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He just follows it around and films its daily life.
I would delete this as you said something very similar two sentences previously |
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And trust me you can learn so many things from observing closely.
typically we don't start sentences with "And" |
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Did you know that an octopus' lifespan is about one year? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s very short. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The movie is fascinating and very moving. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, if you are an emotional person like I am, I advise you to have your Kleenex box at hand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You will definitely need it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A Movie Review |
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It’s called My Octopus Teacher. |
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So, he turns to the ocean and starts to go free dive regularly. |
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Trust me you can learn so many things from observing closely. |
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The last movie I saw was My Octopus Teacher that won the Oscar for best documentary this year. |
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The last movie I saw was My Octopus Teacher which won the Oscar for best documentary this year. |
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