Nov. 19, 2022
A Mosquito
It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month. I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-mother removed the mosquito net last Friday. The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius). But the mosquito never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
I prayed as usual hoping mosquitoes only suck blood but not hum around.
It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month.
i thought "coming by the end of the end" sounded natural to me :,(
I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-motherin-laws, my mother-in-law removed thea mosquito nest last Friday.
"in-laws" refers to everyone who is a part of your spouse's family - everyone who is your relative-in-law
just saying "in-laws" here most likely means your spouse's parents, but it could also include their siblings. rarely anything beyond that. i just saw that someone else corrected this to say "parents-in-law" and i have never heard somebody say that before :v
also - "the" refers to something specific, but this is the first time you talked about a mosquito nest here, so you just say "a" instead. there's no need to point out a specific one since this is the only one you've talked about.
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
it can also be spelled "mosquitoes" - both are correct
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i don't usually correct when somebody else has, but i thought i had something different to add. it's probably just regional differences? :v
also man i hate mosquitos!! they're the only animals i'm okay with killing >:(
Nov. 20, 2022
Thank you, you are so kind! I noticed "will be doing" are more popular than "will do" on youtube. And the explanation of "in-laws" is excellent and helpful for me.
Nov. 20, 2022
Thank you, you are so kind! I noticed "will be doing" are more popular than "will do" on youtube. And the explanation of "in-laws" is excellent and helpful for me.
aww thank you!! and yeah, we love the progressive tenses in english haha. although i think the future progressive is slightly less popular than the present progressive. only slighlty!
A Mosquito
It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming byat the end of next month.
Either: It's December or We are in December
I live (together) with my law-in-parents, my law-in-motherparents-in-law, my mother-in-law removed the mosquito net last Friday.
Instead of removed tried: took down, put away
The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius).
But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night.
I prayed as usual hoping mosquitoes only suck blood but not hum around.
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Great writing! :)
Nov. 19, 2022
It's happy to see "Great writing!", I will never forget "parents-in-law". Thank you! :))
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It's in December already, and the winter solstice will be coming by the end of next month. It's Either: It's December or We are in December It's i thought "coming by the end of the end" sounded natural to me :,( |
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I live together with my law-in-parents, my law-in-mother removed the mosquito net last Friday. I live (together) with my Instead of removed tried: took down, put away I live together with my "in-laws" refers to everyone who is a part of your spouse's family - everyone who is your relative-in-law just saying "in-laws" here most likely means your spouse's parents, but it could also include their siblings. rarely anything beyond that. i just saw that someone else corrected this to say "parents-in-law" and i have never heard somebody say that before :v also - "the" refers to something specific, but this is the first time you talked about a mosquito nest here, so you just say "a" instead. there's no need to point out a specific one since this is the only one you've talked about. |
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The local temperature is around 15 degrees celsius(I don't know how to input the symbol celsius). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But the mosquito never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night. But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these But the mosquitos never disappear, I didn't sleep well last night, and one or more of these kinds of disgusting insects hummed all night. it can also be spelled "mosquitoes" - both are correct |
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