July 24, 2024
A Modern Story
"In a land far, far away..."
"Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"Yes."
"So why don't you start with the classic 'Once upon a time'?"
"Because this is a modern story. Would you please not interrupt? And by the way, who are you?"
"I'm a reader."
"A reader? You can't be a reader. I haven't written the story yet!"
"I know that. Just ignore I'm here. I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word."
"Don't worry. I'll just seat here and be like a statue"
(To be continued)
"In a land far, far away..."
"Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"Yes."
"So why don't you start with the classic 'Once upon a time'?"
"Because this is a modern story. Would you please not interrupt? And anyway, who are you?"
"I'm a reader."
"A reader? You can't be a reader— I haven't written the story yet!"
"I know that. Just pretend I'm not here. I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word."
"Don't worry. I'll just sit here and be like a statue."
(To be continued)
A Modern Story
"In a land far, far away..." "Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"Yes."
"So why don't you start with the classic 'Once upon a time'?"
"Because this is a modern story.
Would you please not interrupt?
And by the way, who are you?"
You could also say 'And anyway,'
"I'm a reader."
"A reader?
You can't be a reader.
I haven't written the story yet!"
You could join this sentence to the last one with a dash.
"I know that.
Just ignore I'm herme.
Or 'Just pretend I'm not here.'
I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word."
"Don't worry.
I'll just seait here and be like a statue"
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(To be continued)
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Very nicely written, I'm interested to read more!
July 24, 2024
Thank you! I'm new here and still trying to figure out how this platform works.: )
A Mmodern Sstory
"In a land far, far away..." "Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"Yes."
"Because this is a modern story.
And by the way, who are you?"
"I'm a reader."
You can't be a reader.
"I know that.
Just ignore I'm here.
I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word."
"Don't worry.
I'll just seat here and be like a statue"
¶¶
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(To be continued)
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Normally you use quotation marks and the beginning and end of each character’s dialogue
A Modern Story
"In a land far, far away..." "Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"So why don't you start with the classic 'Once upon a time'?"
"Because this is a modern story.
WCould you please not interrupt me?
You can also say:
"Don't interrupt me!"
Or:
"Please don't interrupt me"
And by the way, who are you?"
Just ignore I'mme, pretend that I'm not here.
I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word from you."
"Don't worry.
I'll just seait here and be like a statue"
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(To be continued)
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Even though "I'm a reader" and "A reader? You can't be a reader" is technically correct, I would change them this way:
"I'm the reader"
"The reader? You can't be the reader"
July 24, 2024
I think that's what I was looking for, but I'm not sure. Does "the reader" work as a generic term for "reader" in this context?
I mean, if "the reader" worked like this snippet I pasted:
"The READER commands the services of distinguished writers in every branch of literature and science."
Thank you for the corrections!
July 24, 2024
Is it possible for me to edit my own messages? I'm sorry , I'm new here.
"In a land far, far away..." "Wait, wait, wait... Are you going to tell us a story?"
"Yes."
"So why don't you start with the classic 'Once upon a time'?"
"Because this is a modern story.
Would you please not interrupt?
And by the way, who are you?"
"I'm a reader."
"A reader?
You can't be a reader.
I haven't written the story yet!"
"I know that.
Just ignore the fact that I'm here.
Your original sentence is perfectly understandable, it just doesn't sound natural. You could also say "Just ignore my presence" and it would sound perfect.
I won't bother you."
"Fine, but I don't wanna hear a single word."
"Don't worry.
I'll just seait here and beact like a statue"
¶¶
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(To be continued)
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I hope I get to read your story!
July 24, 2024
Thank you!
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