Dec. 22, 2019
Hey, I am Nick, live in Guangzhou now as working in an Multinational company (Headquarter in US) for couples of years. I love my wife and my little boy very much and we stay with each other in a warm apartment in this city.
I need to improve English urgently not only in writing but also in speaking, because I was promoted in a position which need to communicate with division about projects and business update in daily work. But my foundarmental is not as well as I believe.
For the clear objective, today I learned how to use VPN to log in the Reddit and decided to start writing down my daily life in China to share my writing to someone good at English, if you can teach me some skill in English would be more better for me.
Today is day 1, it is the beginning of my project. Hope I can keep it in 100days.
Thanks for your reading.
A middle- aged man(37) Chinese man is learning English
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Today is day 1, it is the beginning of my project.
HI hope I can keep stick with int for 100 days.
Thanks for your reading.
A middle- aged man(37 years old) Chinese man is learning English
Hey, I am Nick,. I live in Guangzhou now asand have now been working in an Mat multinational company (H, headquartered in the US), for a couples of years.
I love my wife and my little boy very much, and we stay with each olive together in a warm apartment in thise city.
I need to improve English urgently —not only in writing but also in speaking, —because I was promoted into a position in which I will need to communicate with the division about projects and business updates in our daily work.
But my foundarmental is not as well as I believeI don't think my foundation is good enough.
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Today is day 1,; it is the beginning of my project.
HI hope I can keep it inup for 100 days.
Thanks for your reading.
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