Nov. 11, 2020
A meteor shower
I'm in Nagano now. It's much colder here than in my city. I brought some warm clothes. I'm fine so far. Last night, looking out of the window, the sky was sparkling with stars, so we went to see stars outside. Luckily, we saw a meteor shower. We saw several shooting stars and made a wish. It's the best starry sky that I have ever seen. I'm so glad I came. We'll go see a meteor shower tonight as well. Apparently, a meteor shower in November will peak tonight. I hope that it'll be a cloudless day tonight.
今長野に来てます。私の住んでいるところよりもずっと寒いです。防寒具をたくさんもってきたので、今のところ大丈夫です。昨日の夜、窓の外を見るとたくさんの星が輝いていたので、私達は星を見に外に出ました。ラッキーなことに、昨日は流星群を見ることができました。流れ星をいつくかみて、願い事をしました。今まで見た中で最高の星空でした。ここに来れてよかったです。今日も流星群を見る予定です。今月の流星群は今日の夜がピークらしいです。今日の夜も快晴だといいなと思っています。
A meteor shower
I'm in Nagano now.
It's much colder here than in my city.
I brought some warm clothes.
I'm fine so far.
Last night, looking out of the window, the sky was sparkling with stars, so we went outside to see the stars outside.
Luckily, we saw a meteor shower.
We saw several shooting stars and made a wish.
It' was the best starry sky that I have ever seen.
I'm so glad I came.
We'll go see a meteor shower tonight as well.
Apparently, a meteor shower in November will peak tonight.
I hope that it'll be a cloudless day tonight.
Nov. 22, 2020
Thank you!
A meteor shower
I'm in Nagano now.
It's much colder here than in my city.
I brought some warm clothes.
I'm fine so far.
Last night, looking out of the window, the sky was sparkling with stars, so we went to see stars outside.
Luckily, we saw a meteor shower.
We saw several shooting stars and made a wish.
It' was the best starry sky that I have ever seen.
I'm so glad I came.
We'll go see a meteor shower tonight as well.
Apparently, a meteor shower in November will peak tonight.
I hope that it'll be a cloudless day tonight.
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It sounds like a great night! Your writing is very clear, i enjoyed reading this.
Nov. 11, 2020
Thank for the corrections! I'm excited. :D
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