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Jack

Feb. 13, 2024

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A Message to My Language Partner

Hey Kai, I am very happy to receive your messages.

A few weeks before this Chinese new year, I bought an apartment on Hainan island. The apartment is near Haikou, the capital of Hainan province. It is only ten kilometers from Hakou to the residential community I live in.

My parents-in-law, a few of their children's families, my wife and I, and my son's family celebrated Chinese New Year here. Now all of us are still in Hainan.

When we left our home town, Fuyang, it was snowing. When we arrived at Hainan Island in only two hours, it was 20 degrees Celsius. We needed to change winter clothes to summer clothes.

I guess you know Hainan Island. It is surrounded by the South China Sea. Many mainland Chinese people spend winter on Hainan Island. In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that are in northern China.

Hainan is the only province in tropical areas in China, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is to the south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it.

I just checked today's temperatures in Haikou and KL. It is 26° in Haikou and 33° in KL.

I also wish you and your family a healthy, peaceful and happy Chinese new year. Take care and see you soon.

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A Message to My Language Partner

Hey Kai, I am very happy to receive your messages.

A few weeks before this Chinese new year, I bought an apartment on Hainan island.

The apartment is near Haikou, the capital of Hainan province.

It is only ten kilometers from Hakou to the residential community I live inThe residential community I live in is only ten kilometers from Hakou.

My parents-in-law, a few of their children's families, my wife and I, and my son's family celebrated Chinese New Year together here.

Now all of us are still in Hainan.

When we left our home town, Fuyang, it was snowing.

When we arrived atin Hainan Island in only, which is less than two hours away, it was 20 degrees Celsius.

We needehad to change our winter clothes to summer clothones.

I guess you know that Hainan Island.

You can connect this and the next sentence together

It is surrounded by the South China Sea.

Many mainland Chinese people spend winter on Hainan Island.

In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that arelocated in northern China.

In China, Hainan is the only province in tropical areas in Chinalocated in the tropics, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is to further south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it(around 2000 kilometers) of Hainan island.

I just checked today's temperatures in both Haikou and KL.

It is 26°C in Haikou and 33°C in KL.

I also wish you and your family a healthy, peaceful and happy Chinese new year.

Take care and see you soon.

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Jack

Feb. 14, 2024

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Thank you very much.

A Message to My Language Partner

Hey Kai, I am very happy to receive your messages.

A few weeks before this Chinese new year, I bought an apartment on Hainan island.

The apartment is near Haikou, the capital of Hainan province.

It is only ten kilometers from Haikou to the residential community I live in.

My parents-in-law, a few of their children's families, my wife and I, and my son's family celebrated Chinese New Year here.

Now all of us are still in Hainan.

When we left our home town, Fuyang, it was snowing.

When we arrived at Hainan Island inafter only two hours, it was 20 degrees Celsius.

We needed to change from winter clothes to summer clothes.

I guess you know Hainan Island.

It is surrounded by the South China Sea.

Many mainland Chinese people spend winter on Hainan Island.

In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that are inof northern China.

Hainan is the only province in the tropical pareas int of China, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is about 2000 kilometers to the south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it.

I just checked today's temperatures in Haikou and KL.

It is 26° in Haikou and 33° in KL.

I also wish you and your family a healthy, peaceful and happy Chinese new year.

Take care and see you soon.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Feb. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much.

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A few weeks before this Chinese new year, I bought an apartment on Hainan island.


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The apartment is near Haikou, the capital of Hainan province.


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It is only ten kilometers from Hakou to the residential community I live in.


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It is only ten kilometers from Hakou to the residential community I live inThe residential community I live in is only ten kilometers from Hakou.

My parents-in-law, a few of their children's families, my wife and I, and my son's family celebrated Chinese New Year here.


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My parents-in-law, a few of their children's families, my wife and I, and my son's family celebrated Chinese New Year together here.

Now all of us are still in Hainan.


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When we left our home town, Fuyang, it was snowing.


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When we arrived at Hainan Island in only two hours, it was 20 degrees Celsius.


When we arrived at Hainan Island inafter only two hours, it was 20 degrees Celsius.

When we arrived atin Hainan Island in only, which is less than two hours away, it was 20 degrees Celsius.

We needed to change winter clothes to summer clothes.


We needed to change from winter clothes to summer clothes.

We needehad to change our winter clothes to summer clothones.

I guess you know Hainan Island.


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I guess you know that Hainan Island.

You can connect this and the next sentence together

It is surrounded by the South China Sea.


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It is surrounded by the South China Sea.

Many mainland Chinese people spend winter on Hainan Island.


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In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that are in northern China.


In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that are inof northern China.

In my community, I can see cars from many provinces that arelocated in northern China.

I just checked today's temperatures in Haikou and KL.


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I just checked today's temperatures in both Haikou and KL.

Hainan is the only province in tropical areas in China, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is to the south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it.


Hainan is the only province in the tropical pareas int of China, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is about 2000 kilometers to the south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it.

In China, Hainan is the only province in tropical areas in Chinalocated in the tropics, but I guess it is not as hot as Malaysia, because Malaysia is to further south of Hainan island and about 2000 kilometers from it(around 2000 kilometers) of Hainan island.

It is 26° in Haikou and 33° in KL.


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It is 26°C in Haikou and 33°C in KL.

I also wish you and your family a healthy, peaceful and happy Chinese new year.


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Take care and see you soon.


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