Sept. 23, 2022
I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part of recent messages.
After reading Memory's messages, I worry about her so much.
Health is everything and no health no life, so Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; be away from your phone and computer.
In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regular routine.
I hope you get well soon and be healthy for your entire time.
God bless you. Take care.
I finally have a little bit of spare time now, andso I have checked part ofsome recent messages.
After reading Memory's messages, I've been worrying about her so much.
It's more natural to use "have been worrying" here.
Health is everything and no, because a healthy body means a health noy life, so. This is the reason that what Memory should do right now is (to) have a good rest; be away from your phone and computer.
In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regular routinedo it regularly.
We usually say, 'make it part of your daily routine'.
I hope you get well soon, and be healthy for your entire timecontinue to always stay healthy.
This sounds a bit more natural👍
God bless you.
Take care.
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Overall, great job! It was easy to understand what you meant to say.
A Message
Since I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part ofsome of most recent messages I've received.
"Part" would mean that you read only some of a message (like 30-40% of it at most) instead of reading all of it.
After reading Memory's messages, I've started to worry about her so much.
I chose "I've started to" because it seems that Memory's messages are the reason you're worrying about her.
Health is everything and no health no life, so, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest;sleep well and be away from youher phone and computer.
I was debating on how to fix this sentence, so I'm curious to see others' takes on it.
In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regularmake it part of your daily routine.
I hope you get well soon and bestay healthy for your entire time.
God bless you.
Take care.
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There were no spelling mistakes in this. Most of the errors were about making the sentence flow more naturally, but I still think you did a good job. I hope everything goes well for the both of you.
A Message
I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part ofsome of my recent messages.
After reading Memory's messages, I am so worryied about her so much.
To worry about smth focuses on the action; to be worried about smth focuses on the feeling/emotion.
Health is everything and no health means no life, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; be—stay away from youtheir phone and computer.
Semicolons are used to separate things that could be sentences on their own. Here, since you're trying to rephrase/elaborate on "have a good rest," the correct punctuation to use is an em dash.
In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it asmake it a regular routine.
Why are we suddenly switching to you from her? Were the first two sentences just the introduction?
I hope you get well soon and be healthy for your entire timestay in good health.
God bless you.
Take care.
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After reading Memory's messages, I worry about her so much. After reading Memory's messages, I am so worr To worry about smth focuses on the action; to be worried about smth focuses on the feeling/emotion. After reading Memory's messages, I've started to worry about her I chose "I've started to" because it seems that Memory's messages are the reason you're worrying about her. After reading Memory's messages, I've been worrying about her so much. It's more natural to use "have been worrying" here. |
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In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regular routine. In the meantime, please Why are we suddenly switching to you from her? Were the first two sentences just the introduction? In the meantime, please In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and We usually say, 'make it part of your daily routine'. |
I hope you get well soon and be healthy for your entire time. I hope you get well soon and I hope you get well soon and I hope you get well soon, and This sounds a bit more natural👍 |
God bless you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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