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Jack

Sept. 23, 2022

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I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part of recent messages.

After reading Memory's messages, I worry about her so much.

Health is everything and no health no life, so Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; be away from your phone and computer.

In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regular routine.

I hope you get well soon and be healthy for your entire time.

God bless you. Take care.

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I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part ofmy recent messages.

Health is everything and with no health there is no life, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; and be away from youher phone and computer.

In the meantime, please do exercise as much as youshe can, and set it as a regular routine.

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I'm not sure if you're talking to or about Memory - I changed it to third person, but you can say "you" if you're talking to her. I hope she feels better soon!

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Jack

Sept. 23, 2022

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She and I are in the same WeChat group. After seeing her messages, I wrote this message, but she was not at present when I wrote and sent this message. Thank you very much.

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cats

Sept. 24, 2022

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She and I are in the same WeChat group. After seeing her messages, I wrote this message, but she was not at present when I wrote and sent this message. Thank you very much.

That makes a lot of sense, thank you! I think you could use either in this case then :)

A Message

I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and so I have checked part ofsome of my recent messages.

After reading Memory's messages, I worry about her so much.

Health is everything and no health means no life, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; and be away from yourthe phone and computer.

In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it asmake it a regular routine.

I hope you get well soon and beremain healthy for your entire time.

God bless you.

Take care.

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Nice work!

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Jack

Sept. 23, 2022

12

Thank you very much.

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I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part of recent messages.


I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and so I have checked part ofsome of my recent messages.

I finally have a little bit of spare time now, and I have checked part ofmy recent messages.

After reading Memory's messages, I worry about her so much.


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Health is everything and no health no life, so Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; be away from your phone and computer.


Health is everything and no health means no life, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; and be away from yourthe phone and computer.

Health is everything and with no health there is no life, so what Memory should do right now is to have a good rest; and be away from youher phone and computer.

In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it as a regular routine.


In the meantime, please do exercise as much as you can, and set it asmake it a regular routine.

In the meantime, please do exercise as much as youshe can, and set it as a regular routine.

I hope you get well soon and be healthy for your entire time.


I hope you get well soon and beremain healthy for your entire time.

God bless you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Take care.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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