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The first song by Teresa Teng l have heard is "Tian Mimi"

Decades ago, I was a middle school student. I think it would be the first year of middle school. In the spring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20 s coming from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school. The playground was out of the school but not so far.

Every time they did their telegram practice in the playground, they would carry a fancy recorder and play a song called Tian Mimi sung by Teresa Teng.

I had never heard that kind of song in my life. It's a very beautiful and nice song, together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder. I couldn't describe what my feelings were when I was listening to the song.

It's a very sweet and relaxing song anyway. Everyone likes to listen to it.

I have known of Teresa Teng since then. I think she is a great singer. No matter how bad a song is, it will become sweet and nice as long as it is sung by Teresa Teng.

Teresa Teng, you are people's forever memory.

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Jan. 11, 2023

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In the spring, some young boysmen and (young girls) women who were in their 20 s comings from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

What is telegram practice?? We’re they practicing using a telegraph machine, like the machines people used before the telephone was invented!?

Young boys and girls would be less than 10 years old.

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Jan. 11, 2023

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In the spring, some young boysmen and (young girls) women who were in their 20 s comings from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

What is telegram practice?? We’re they practicing using a telegraph machine, like the machines people used before the telephone was invented!?

Young boys and girls would be less than 10 years old.

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Jack

Jan. 11, 2023

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I think [it would behave been | it was] the first year of middle school.

“I think it was” is more natural, but you could say “I think it would have been.” “I think it would be” isn’t natural when you’re guessing about something in the past.

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In the spring, some young boysmen and (young girls) women who were in their 20 s comings from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

What is telegram practice?? We’re they practicing using a telegraph machine, like the machines people used before the telephone was invented!?

Young boys and girls would be less than 10 years old.

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Jack

Jan. 11, 2023

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Oops, it did it again: “we’re they” should be “were they”!

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A Memory

Decades ago, I was a middle school student.

I couldn't describe what my feelings were when I was listening to the song.

Everyone likes to listen to it.

I think she is a great singer.

No matter how bad a song is, it will become sweet and nice as long as it is sung by Teresa Teng.

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Jack

Jan. 11, 2023

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In the sSpring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20 s coming's from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

I don't know what "telegram practice" is so this is my best guess at a correction.

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Jan. 11, 2023

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They used telegram machines to practice how to send and receive telegrams.

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Jack

Jan. 10, 2023

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I think it would beas the first year of middle school.

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Jack

Jan. 10, 2023

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It's a very beautiful and nice song, when listened to together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder.

I'm not 100% sure what is the intention here. Is the song sung by a group of people or is it a group of people singing the song with Teresa Teng?

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It's a very beautiful and nice song, when listened to together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder.

I'm not 100% sure what is the intention here. Is the song sung by a group of people or is it a group of people singing the song with Teresa Teng?

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The first song by Teresa Teng l have heard is "Tian Mimi"


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Decades ago, I was a middle school student.


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I think it would be the first year of middle school.


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“I think it was” is more natural, but you could say “I think it would have been.” “I think it would be” isn’t natural when you’re guessing about something in the past.

In the spring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20 s coming from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.


In the spring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20 s's were coming from my home county seat and were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school. In the spring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20's were coming from my home county seat and were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

In the sSpring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20 s coming's from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school. In the Spring, some young boys and young girls who were in their 20's from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

I don't know what "telegram practice" is so this is my best guess at a correction.

In the spring, some young boysmen and (young girls) women who were in their 20 s comings from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school. In the spring, some young men and (young) women who were in their 20s from my home county seat were doing telegram practice on the playground of the school.

What is telegram practice?? We’re they practicing using a telegraph machine, like the machines people used before the telephone was invented!? Young boys and girls would be less than 10 years old.

The playground was out of the school but not so far.


The playground was outside of the school but not so far. The playground was outside of the school but not so far.

The playground was outside of the school but not sovery far. The playground was outside of the school but not very far.

Every time they did their telegram practice in the playground, they would carry a fancy recorder and play a song called Tian Mimi sung by Teresa Teng.


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I had never heard that kind of song in my life.


I had never heard that kind of song in my life before. I had never heard that kind of song in my life before.

It's a very beautiful and nice song, together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder.


It's a very beautiful and nice song, when listened to together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder. It's a very beautiful and nice song, when listened to together with a group of young people, spring time and that big modern recorder.

I'm not 100% sure what is the intention here. Is the song sung by a group of people or is it a group of people singing the song with Teresa Teng?

It's a very beautiful and nice song and, together with a group of young people, sSpring time and that big modern recorder, it made the song very special to me. It's a very beautiful and nice song and, together with a group of young people, Spring time and that big modern recorder, it made the song very special to me.

I couldn't describe what my feelings were when I was listening to the song.


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It's a very sweet and relaxing song anyway.


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Everyone likes to listen to it.


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I have known of Teresa Teng since then.


I have knownThat's how I learned of Teresa Teng since then. That's how I learned of Teresa Teng.

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or I have known about Teresa Teng ever since then.

I think she is a great singer.


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No matter how bad a song is, it will become sweet and nice as long as it is sung by Teresa Teng.


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Teresa Teng, you are people's forever memory.


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or - Teresa Teng, you are forever in my memory. - Teresa Teng, you are forever in the memory of everyone.

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