Jan. 20, 2025
A master’s degree
In a few months, I will get a bachelors degree. It is a joyful event, but I need to make a decision: what is next? One part of me love an economic, second part love a creativity and event, third love a management… I know I need to choose one way and prepare to entrance exams, but the world so big and there are so much that I want to explore.
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In a few months, I will obtain/get a bachelor's degree.
It is a joyful event, but I need to make a decision: what isdecide what I want to do next?.
One part of me love ans economics, secondanother part love as creativity and events, and a third part love as management…. I know I need to choose one waypath and prepare tofor entrance exams, but the world is so big, and there areis so much that I want to explore.
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Good luck deciding what you want to do next.
A master’s degree
In a few months, I will get a bachelor's degree.
It is a joyful event, but I need to make a decision:, what is next?
One part of me love ans economic,s, a second part love as creativity and event,s, and a third love as management… I know I need to choose one way and prepare tofor the entrance exams, but the world is so big and there areis so much that I want to explore.
It is a joyfulhappy event, but I need to make a decision: what is next?
Joyful is a rarely used word - the meaning isn't wrong for what you want, but it sounds strange used here.
One part of me love ans economic,s, a second part love as creativity and event,s, a third part love as management… I know I need to choose one way and prepare tofor entrance exams, but the world is so big and there areis so much that I want to explore.
A master’s degree
In a few months, I will get a bachelor's degree.
It is a joyful event, but I need to make a decision: what is next?
One part of me love ans economic,s, a second part love as creativity and event,s, a third love as management… I know I need to choose one way and prepare tofor entrance exams, but the world is so big and there areis so much that I want to explore.
A master’s degree
It would be good to mention that you're planning to work towards a Master's degree in your text
In a few months, I will get a bachelors degree.
It is a joyful event, but I need to make a decision: what i's next?
You could also say "what comes next?"
One part of me love ans economics, second partanother love as creativity and event, hosting, and a third love as management. … I know I need to choose one way and prepare toand begin preparing for entrance exams, but the world is so big and there areis so much that I want to explore.
What do you mean by "event"? Is it distinct from management?
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It's understandable that you want more time to work through your options. Right now, I'm a high school senior and even before I have really started my adult life I've experienced that feeling that I might not have the time to integrate all of my passions into what I ultimately end up doing. Do you believe that you'll ultimately be able to develop the interests left out of your Masters through other experiences?
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