Nov. 19, 2019
A lovely day
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)
Also it’s lovely weather today.
I found a cute cat on my way home.
Those small things made me happy :)
I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
I hope you all have a lovely day☺️
今朝、息子は毎日通う保育所に喜んで行きました。
天気もよくて、帰り道には可愛い猫を見つけました🐈
そんな小さなことで嬉しくなりました。
私は、小さな幸せを集めてはそっと心の中の宝箱にしまっています。
みなさんもいい日になりますように☺️
This morning my son was excited to go to athe daycare center which he goes to everyday ;)
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Use "the" when writing about something specific.
Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today.
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A more natural way to talk about the weather (the weather becomes the subject).
I am collecting such every such small happiness and putting them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
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Because you start the sentence with "I am collecting", the tense of "put" must match: "and (I am) putting"
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I'm glad your day was so nice! :)
Nov. 19, 2019
Thank you so much for correction with explanations in detail! They made sense to me!
I didn’t know “the weather” can be used as a subject. I learned a lot :)
A lovely day
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center whichre, that he goes to everyday ;)
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Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today.
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I found a cute cat on my way home.
Thoese small things made me happy :)
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I am collecting such every small happiness and putting them sofgently into a treasure box inside my heart.
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I hope you all have a lovely day☺️
Dec. 8, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
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A lovely day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;) This morning my son was excited to go to Use "the" when writing about something specific. This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare cent |
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Also it’s lovely weather today. Also A more natural way to talk about the weather (the weather becomes the subject). Also |
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I found a cute cat on my way home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Those small things made me happy :) Th |
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I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart. I am collecting Because you start the sentence with "I am collecting", the tense of "put" must match: "and (I am) putting" I am collecting |
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May you all have a lovely day☺️ |
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I hope you all have a lovely day☺️ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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