Dec. 28, 2021
I could say that I have the luck that a lot of things or moments, do they me happy. When I get home and I see the face of joy of my wife, for instance. I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs. I have never seen any dog doing any kind of problems. Unfortunately, with people, I can't tell the same. Also I like much my trips by bike along the beaches in a sunny and peaceful morning.
A Lot of Things
I could say (that) I have the'm lucky that a lot of things or moments, do they make me happy.
In my revision, a lot of times we'll omit the first "that" (the one in parentheses). If I were talking I would just say, "I could say I'm lucky that...".
WFor instance, when I get home and I see the face of joy ofn my wife, for instan's face.
You can put "for instance" at the end no problem. I just put it at the beginning since I think it's a little more common that way, especially when speaking.
I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs.
I have never seen any dog docausing any kind of problems.
We usually say "causing" problems instead of "doing" problems.
Unfortunately, with people, I can't tellsay the same.
Also I like muchreally enjoy my trips by bike along the beaches ion a sunny and peaceful morning.
We don't typically say, "like much". I would say something like, "I really like..." or "I really enjoy..." instead. Either one sounds more natural to me. I put "really enjoy" in my correction because it's the one I'm used to hearing the most in these kinds of situations and the one I would say if I were speaking, but "really like" works too.
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Overall, really good. I had no problem understanding everything you wrote. Just made some minor changes to make it sound a little more natural. Great job!
A Lot of Things This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I could say that I have the luck that a lot of things or moments, do they me happy. I could say (that) I In my revision, a lot of times we'll omit the first "that" (the one in parentheses). If I were talking I would just say, "I could say I'm lucky that...". |
When I get home and I see the face of joy of my wife, for instance.
You can put "for instance" at the end no problem. I just put it at the beginning since I think it's a little more common that way, especially when speaking. |
I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I have never seen any dog doing any kind of problems. I have never seen any dog We usually say "causing" problems instead of "doing" problems. |
Unfortunately, with people, I can't tell the same. Unfortunately, with people, I can't |
Also I like much my trips by bike along the beaches in a sunny and peaceful morning. Also I We don't typically say, "like much". I would say something like, "I really like..." or "I really enjoy..." instead. Either one sounds more natural to me. I put "really enjoy" in my correction because it's the one I'm used to hearing the most in these kinds of situations and the one I would say if I were speaking, but "really like" works too. |
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