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Ducky

Dec. 28, 2021

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A Lot of Things

I could say that I have the luck that a lot of things or moments, do they me happy. When I get home and I see the face of joy of my wife, for instance. I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs. I have never seen any dog doing any kind of problems. Unfortunately, with people, I can't tell the same. Also I like much my trips by bike along the beaches in a sunny and peaceful morning.

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A Lot of Things

I could say (that) I have the'm lucky that a lot of things or moments, do they make me happy.

In my revision, a lot of times we'll omit the first "that" (the one in parentheses). If I were talking I would just say, "I could say I'm lucky that...".

WFor instance, when I get home and I see the face of joy ofn my wife, for instan's face.

You can put "for instance" at the end no problem. I just put it at the beginning since I think it's a little more common that way, especially when speaking.

I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs.

I have never seen any dog docausing any kind of problems.

We usually say "causing" problems instead of "doing" problems.

Unfortunately, with people, I can't tellsay the same.

Also I like muchreally enjoy my trips by bike along the beaches ion a sunny and peaceful morning.

We don't typically say, "like much". I would say something like, "I really like..." or "I really enjoy..." instead. Either one sounds more natural to me. I put "really enjoy" in my correction because it's the one I'm used to hearing the most in these kinds of situations and the one I would say if I were speaking, but "really like" works too.

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Overall, really good. I had no problem understanding everything you wrote. Just made some minor changes to make it sound a little more natural. Great job!

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Ducky

Dec. 29, 2021

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A lot of thanks for your valuable corrections.

A Lot of Things


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I could say that I have the luck that a lot of things or moments, do they me happy.


I could say (that) I have the'm lucky that a lot of things or moments, do they make me happy.

In my revision, a lot of times we'll omit the first "that" (the one in parentheses). If I were talking I would just say, "I could say I'm lucky that...".

When I get home and I see the face of joy of my wife, for instance.


WFor instance, when I get home and I see the face of joy ofn my wife, for instan's face.

You can put "for instance" at the end no problem. I just put it at the beginning since I think it's a little more common that way, especially when speaking.

I love animals, so when I travel by underground I like to see travelers with their dogs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have never seen any dog doing any kind of problems.


I have never seen any dog docausing any kind of problems.

We usually say "causing" problems instead of "doing" problems.

Unfortunately, with people, I can't tell the same.


Unfortunately, with people, I can't tellsay the same.

Also I like much my trips by bike along the beaches in a sunny and peaceful morning.


Also I like muchreally enjoy my trips by bike along the beaches ion a sunny and peaceful morning.

We don't typically say, "like much". I would say something like, "I really like..." or "I really enjoy..." instead. Either one sounds more natural to me. I put "really enjoy" in my correction because it's the one I'm used to hearing the most in these kinds of situations and the one I would say if I were speaking, but "really like" works too.

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