A lot of Good News

adichira

Nov. 27, 2025

A lot of Good News

Last year, I made my vision board. It was my first time making it, and I tried to put some important goals on it. I thought that a few of them were unattainable... but I achieved most of them, and I'm on the right path for the rest. I'm so proud of myself, and of my husband too. Some of these goals required work from both of us. My goals that I wrote in 2024 for my 2025 were:

1. Help my parents to obtain their passports: we did it easily, and now we can travel together.
2. Present my VISA application: it's in process right now.
3. Visit the Tulum Pyramids: I'll do it together with my family during christmas vacation.
4. Improve my English level: I am really doing it, my level is better compared to my English in 2024.
5. Take care of myself: I invested time, effort and money in myself. I feel more confident about my appearance. I had eye surgery to correct my vision, which is a huge thing.
6. Travel: I traveled with my husband to different places this year.
7. Attend a Shakira concert: I had the opportunity this year, and I took it. It was good, but maybe my expectations were higher.
8. Go to the gym: I am really doing it, I go there three times a week. I've been going there for two years.
9. Get married: I couldn't do it alone, maybe the picture on my PC wallpaper put a bit of pressure on my husband, haha. But yes, I'm married now, and very happy.
10. Enjoy a romantic sunset on the beach with my husband: We did it because we had the opportunity to celebrate our honeymoon.
11. Get pregnant: I didn't have big expectations because during this process, I learned how sensitive our bodies are to thoughts, worries, comments, etc. We tried for two or three months, and seeing a negative test result broke me a lot. We went to the doctor, and a week ago I found out that I'm pregnant. I'm so excited about everything, but this makes me feel so happy and enthusiastic about my future. This news will be a great Christmas gift for my parents and my parents-in-law too.

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PacificOcean

A lLot of Good News

Last year, I made mya vision board for myself.

This sounds more natural, as this is your first time mentioning a vision board

It was my first time making itone, and I tried to put some important goals on it.

This is really minor, but “it” sounds off here. In a phrase like this, we’d normally say “one”

I thought that a few of them were unattainable... but I’ve achieved most of them, and I'm on the right path for the rest.

wWe did it easily, and now we can travel together.

~~it'~~It’s in procgress right now.

I’m not sure if you mixed up these words or just used one that sounded similar, but for a phrase like this we normally say “it’s in progress”

I'~~ll do it together~~m going to do this with my family during cour Christmas vacation.

This is comprehensible, but it sounds pretty off
1. “I’m” sounds better than “I’ll” in this case
2. The “together” is not needed here, and crowds the sentence
3. Adding a possessive pronoun like “my” or “our” to “Christmas vacation” makes it more clear
4. “Christmas” must be capitalized as it’s a holiday, and a proper noun

I ~~invested~~put time, effort and money into myself.

“Invested” works, but “put time” sounds more natural here

I traveled with my husband to many different places this year.

What you wrote is perfectly fine, but I think adding the word “many” could make this sentence a tiny bit better

I couldn't do it alone, maybe the picture on my PC wallpaper put a bit of pressure on my husband, haha.

This is very minor, but I feel like you should specify more about the picture. What is the picture of? Is it of you and your husband?

I'm so excited about everything, but this makes me feel so happy and enthusiastic ~~about~~for my future.

Very minor, but this sounds more natural

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Good job! I’m glad you were able to achieve your goals this year. And congratulations on being pregnant! I hope it goes well!! :)

adichira

Dec. 9, 2025

Hello! Thank you so much for your comments! I've been away for a long time, processing the news of my pregnancy and all the symptoms, hahaha.

"What is the picture of? Is it of you and your husband?" About that question, the picture was a pregnant belly.

araigoshi

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My goals that I wrote in 2024 for (my) 2025 were:

I think it's more natural to just talk about 2025 in general rather than "my 2025" here.

wWe did it easily, and now we can travel together.

iIt's in procgress right now.

We tried for two or three months, and seeing a negative test result really broke me ~~a lot~~.

More natural choice of stress word for the phrase.

adichira

Dec. 9, 2025

Hello! Thank you so much for your corrections.

riddlememiss

A lot of Good News

Last year, I made my vision board.

It was my first time making it, and I tried to put some important goals on it.

I thought that a few of them were unattainable... but I achieved most of them, and I'm on the right path for the rest.

I'm so proud of myself, and of my husband too.

Some of these goals required work from both of us.

My goals that I wrote in 2024 for my 2025 were:

Help my parents to obtain their passports:

we did it easily, and now we can travel together.

Present my ~~VISA~~visa application:

If you write VISA in caps, people will think you're talking about a credit card.

it's in process right now.

Visit the Tulum Pyramids:

I'll do it together with my family during cChristmas vacation.

Improve my English level:

I am really doing it, my level is better compared to my English in 2024.

Take care of myself:

I invested time, effort and money in myself.

I feel more confident about my appearance.

I had eye surgery to correct my vision, which is a huge thing.

Travel:

I traveled with my husband to different places this year.

Attend a Shakira concert:

I had the opportunity this year, and I took it.

It was good, but maybe my expectations were higher.

Go to the gym:

I am really doing it, I go there three times a week.

I've been going there for two years.

Get married:

I couldn't do it alone, maybe the picture on my PC wallpaper put a bit of pressure on my husband, haha.

But yes, I'm married now, and very happy.

Enjoy a romantic sunset on the beach with my husband:

We did it because we had the opportunity to celebrate our honeymoon.

Get pregnant:

I didn't have big expectations because during this process, I learned how sensitive our bodies are to thoughts, worries, comments, etc.

We tried for two or three months, and seeing a negative test result broke me a lot.

We went to the doctor, and a week ago I found out that I'm pregnant.

I'm so excited about everything, but this makes me feel so happy and enthusiastic about my future.

This news will be a great Christmas gift for my parents and my parents-in-law too.

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Wow, congratulations! How exciting!

adichira

Dec. 9, 2025

Hello! I'm so proud of myself! I did a lot this year, hahaha.

Go to the gym: