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A journey to find rice

Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy. Of course if you pay a high price than you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century. But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item. However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviable choice. So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well. it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands. What's more, it was on sale. We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier. We take out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression a little bit astonished by the amount. With his reaction, I noticed that customers around us should think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do. I encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I corrected each time. But here it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treat the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining how others were thinking of us at that moment.

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A journeytrip to find rice

Living in France means obtafinding rice is not always easy.

Of course, if you pay a higher price than, you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.

But a commoner like me needs to find anthe option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones only slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

There is a brand that I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the customer service of a in the supermarket which sells this item.

However, last month, after opening it, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviablea poor choice.

So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product that is safe enough to consume.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use that rice for other recipes as well.

it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped byat, we found one rice brand of rice that was cheap enough to meet our demands.

What's more, it was on sale.

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted toat was 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.the checkout.

We take outplaced all the bags of rice, and at that point in front of the cashier who made an expression a little bitof astonished by the amount.number of bags.

WithConsidering his reaction, I noticed that customers around us shwould think that we were going to make tons of sushi because, after all that's what Japanese people would do.

I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, whichand I corrected it each time.

But herein this instance, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was to imagining howe what the others were thinking ofabout us at that moment.

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LePain

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you very much for your corrections.

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LePain

Jan. 17, 2023

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A journeytrip to find rice

I have one question! What's the difference between trip and journey? Is trip a little bit shorter?

A jJourney to fFind rRice

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy.

Of course if you pay a high price thaen you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.

But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least theones onesly slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a the supermarket which sells ithis item.

However, last monthLast month, however, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening ithem, making the brand an unviable choice.

We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.

So wWe were then forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", t." That is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.

We capitalize the first letter of all words related to a country and nationality.

it is a staple of diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the wWesterniszation of taste.

"Westernization" is how we spell it in the US.

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.

What's more, it was on sale.

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.

We takeook out all the bags of rice, and, at that point, the cashier made an expression as if he were a little bit astonished by the amounthow much we were buying.

With his reaction, I noticed that the customers around us should thinkprobably thought that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.

I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I have corrected each time.

But hHere, howevere, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining howe what others were thinking of us atin that moment.

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高くないお米が見つかってよかった。上手に書けています!

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LePain

Jan. 17, 2023

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いつも本当にありがとうございます!

Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy.

Of course, if you pay a high price, thaen you wcould get it for sure, like for most of the commodities in thise 21st century.

But a commoner like me needs to find an option available that is as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

There is a brand thatfrom which I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.

“and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.“
I’m sorry, but I’m unsure as regards to what you mean here.

However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand rice bags, which made the brand for us an unviable choice.

So we were forced to embark upon a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is, "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.

“Japanese” and names of all other nationalities/languages are always capitalized.

iIt is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption of it is declining gradually due to the wWesternisation of culinary taste.

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, weMe and my husband stopped by at a supermarket today and found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.

What's more, it was on sale.

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag containweighed 500g, so in total, the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.

We takeook out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression that was a little bit astonished by the amount we were buying.

With his reaction, I noticrecalled that customers around us shwould think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.

I encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I corrected each time.

But here it would be weirdhave been strange to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was imagininge how others were thinking of us at that moment.

To me, “strange” frankly sounds more natural than “weird”, maybe because weird might be used more often in informal contexts.

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Good job. I’m glad that you were able to find more affordable rice.

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LePain

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thanks a lot for your corrections in detail!!

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LePain

Jan. 17, 2023

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There is a brand thatfrom which I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.

I wanted to say 'because of its modest price and also because of the good service of the supermarket which sells the rice'. Would you mind giving me an advice on how I should have written the sentence?

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pythagoreanist

June 17, 2023

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I wanted to say 'because of its modest price and also because of the good service of the supermarket which sells the rice'. Would you mind giving me an advice on how I should have written the sentence?

Hello, sorry for the late response. I think it would have been better here to split the sentence into two. In other words, “There is a brand from which I have been purchasing since last February because of its modest price. I’ve also been buying it because I’m fond of the service of the supermarket that sells it.“ Frankly, though, I’m not sure if “service” in English sounds very natural—native speakers seem to be more likely to say that they “like a store” instead to show that they are fond of it.

A long journey to search for rice


Living in France means obtaining rice is not always easy.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Living in France means obtafinding rice is not always easy.

Of course if you pay a high price than you would get ut for sire, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.


But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.


But a commoner like me needs to find an option available that is as cheap as possible, or at least the ones slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

But a commoner like me needs to find an option available as cheap as possible, or at least theones onesly slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

But a commoner like me needs to find anthe option available as cheap as possible, or at least the ones only slightly more expensive than the ones I used to buy in my home country.

There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because od it's modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.


However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviable choice.


However, last month we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand rice bags, which made the brand for us an unviable choice.

However, last monthLast month, however, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening ithem, making the brand an unviable choice.

We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.

However, last month, after opening it, we found some insects and pieces of cardboard in the rice before opening them, making the brand unviablea poor choice.

So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe to consume.


In France, if it's not an Asian store, japanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.


In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is, "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.

“Japanese” and names of all other nationalities/languages are always capitalized.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", t." That is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use rice for other recipes as well.

We capitalize the first letter of all words related to a country and nationality.

In France, if it's not an Asian store, jJapanese rice is sold as "riz pour sushi", that is "rice for sushi" in English, although, obviously, we use that rice for other recipes as well.

it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.


iIt is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption of it is declining gradually due to the wWesternisation of culinary taste.

it is a staple of diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the wWesterniszation of taste.

"Westernization" is how we spell it in the US.

it is a staple diet which appears very frequently in everyday meals, even thought the consumption is declining gradually due to the westernisation of taste.

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, we found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.


Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped by, weMe and my husband stopped by at a supermarket today and found one rice brand that was cheap enough to meet our demands.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today at a supermarket my husband and I stopped byat, we found one rice brand of rice that was cheap enough to meet our demands.

What's more, it was on sale.


What's more, it was on sale.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.


We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag containweighed 500g, so in total, the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted to 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.

We put about 20 of them in our shopping bag (each rice bag contained 500g so in total the purchase amounted toat was 10kg), and we proceeded to a cashier.the checkout.

We take out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression a little bit astonished by the amount.


We takeook out all the bags of rice, and at that point the cashier made an expression that was a little bit astonished by the amount we were buying.

We takeook out all the bags of rice, and, at that point, the cashier made an expression as if he were a little bit astonished by the amounthow much we were buying.

We take outplaced all the bags of rice, and at that point in front of the cashier who made an expression a little bitof astonished by the amount.number of bags.

With his reaction, I noticed that customers around us should think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.


With his reaction, I noticrecalled that customers around us shwould think that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.

With his reaction, I noticed that the customers around us should thinkprobably thought that we were going to make tons of sushi because that's what Japanese people would do.

WithConsidering his reaction, I noticed that customers around us shwould think that we were going to make tons of sushi because, after all that's what Japanese people would do.

I encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I corrected each time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, which I have corrected each time.

I have encountered this type of misunderstanding several times, whichand I corrected it each time.

But here it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treat the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining how others were thinking of us at that moment.


But here it would be weirdhave been strange to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was imagininge how others were thinking of us at that moment.

To me, “strange” frankly sounds more natural than “weird”, maybe because weird might be used more often in informal contexts.

But hHere, howevere, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was imagining howe what others were thinking of us atin that moment.

But herein this instance, it would be weird to start talking about our dinner or how we would treatuse the ingredients, so all I could do was to imagining howe what the others were thinking ofabout us at that moment.

A journey to search for rice


A journey to find rice


A jJourney to fFind rRice

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

A journeytrip to find rice

Of course if you pay a high price than you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.


Of course, if you pay a high price, thaen you wcould get it for sure, like for most of the commodities in thise 21st century.

Of course if you pay a high price thaen you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.

Of course, if you pay a higher price than, you would get it for sure, like most of the commodities in this 21st century.

There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.


There is a brand thatfrom which I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.

“and the service of a supermarket which sells this item.“ I’m sorry, but I’m unsure as regards to what you mean here.

There is a brand that I had been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the service of a the supermarket which sells ithis item.

There is a brand that I hadve been purchasing since last February because of its modest price and the customer service of a in the supermarket which sells this item.

So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.


So we were forced to embark upon a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.

So wWe were then forced to embark on a journey to search for a product safe enough to consume.

So we were forced to embark on a journey to search for a product that is safe enough to consume.

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