Dec. 13, 2024
A Little Storie
Today in my lunch time, I saw two persons walking around the "Malecon". The Malecon is a place when I get my lunch.
The novelty of these peoples was they was tourist, and I wanted to get closer to them. The reason was, only say "Hello" and can communicate with them.
However I didn't, because they seemed a little busy and I didn't want to bother their walk.
God bless you and thanks for reading
A Little Storiey
"Story" is for the singular. One story, a story, my story. "Stories" is plural. Two stories, lots of stories.
Today in my lunch time, I saw two personsople walking around the "Malecon".
"Person" is singular. One person, two people.
The Malecon is a place whenre I get my lunch.
"When" is for time. "Where" is for places. "When is it?" "It's in the morning". "Where is it?" "It's at my house".
The novelty of these peoples was they wasere tourists, and I wanted to get closer to them.
No "s" on people, it's plural without adding the S. The opposite for "tourists".
The reason was, only just to say "Hello" and can communicate withtalk to them.
More natural to use "talk to", "communicate with" sounds very formal. Like sending messages to aliens.
However I didn't, because they seemed a little busy and I didn't want to bother their walk.
God bless you and thanks for reading
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Really good, just some mix ups on the plurals but it's clear what you wanted to say.
A Little Storiey
Today in myduring lunch time, I saw two personsople walking around the "Malecon".
The Malecon is a place whenre I get my lunch.
The novelty of these peoples was that they wasere tourists, andso I wanted to get closer to them.
The reason was, only just to say "Hello" and canto communicate with them.
However I didn't, however, because they seemed a little busy and I didn't want to bother their walk.
God bless you and thanks for reading
Today in myduring lunch time, I saw two personsople walking around the "Malecon".
The Malecon is a place whenre I get my lunch.
The novelty of these peoples was that they wasere tourists, and I wanted to get closer to them.
The reason was, only to say "Hello" and can communicate with them.
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A Little Storie A Little Stor A Little Stor "Story" is for the singular. One story, a story, my story. "Stories" is plural. Two stories, lots of stories. |
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Today in my lunch time, I saw two persons walking around the "Malecon". Today Today Today in my lunch time, I saw two pe "Person" is singular. One person, two people. |
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The Malecon is a place when I get my lunch. The Malecon is a place whe The Malecon is a place whe The Malecon is a place whe "When" is for time. "Where" is for places. "When is it?" "It's in the morning". "Where is it?" "It's at my house". |
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The novelty of these peoples was they was tourist, and I wanted to get closer to them. The novelty of these people The novelty of these people The novelty of these people No "s" on people, it's plural without adding the S. The opposite for "tourists". |
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The reason was, only say "Hello" and can communicate with them. The reason was The reason was The reason was More natural to use "talk to", "communicate with" sounds very formal. Like sending messages to aliens. |
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However I didn't, because they seemed a little busy and I didn't want to bother their walk.
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