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hebereke

June 10, 2020

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a little scene in a station

“Haven’t the Kodama train which will leave at 8:57 arrived yet?”
“I’m sorry. It is delayed by 15 minutes, sir.”
“I’m in a hurry. Do you have any train else?”
“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02. This one will arrive Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier.”


「8時57分発の下りのこだま号はまだですか」
「あいにく15分ほど延着する見込みです」
「急いでいるのですが、他に列車はありませんか」
「それなら、9時2分発のひかり号にお乗りください。京都には10分早く到着します」

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aA little scene in a station

“Haven’ts the Kodama train which will leaves at 8:57 arrived yet?”

“I’m sorry.

It is delayed by 15 minutes, sir.”

“I’m in a hurry.

Do you have any train elseAre there any other trains?”

“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02.

This one will arrive at Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier.”

aA little scene in a station

“Havesn’t the Kodama train which willthat leaves at 8:57 arrived yet?”

"...which will leave at..." is grammatically correct but sounds less natural to me.

“I’m sorry.

It is delayed by 15 minutes, sir.”

“I’m in a hurry.

Do you have any train else?”Are there any other trains?

"Do you have" sounds a little unnatural to me, though not entirely.

“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02.

Thisat one will arrive at Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier than the Kodama train.”

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hebereke

June 10, 2020

0

thank you!

a little scene in a station


aA little scene in a station

aA little scene in a station

“Haven’t the Kodama train which will leave at 8:57 arrived yet?”


“Havesn’t the Kodama train which willthat leaves at 8:57 arrived yet?”

"...which will leave at..." is grammatically correct but sounds less natural to me.

“Haven’ts the Kodama train which will leaves at 8:57 arrived yet?”

“I’m sorry.


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It is delayed by 15 minutes, sir.”


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“I’m in hurry.


Do you have any train else?”


Do you have any train else?”Are there any other trains?

"Do you have" sounds a little unnatural to me, though not entirely.

Do you have any train elseAre there any other trains?”

“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02.


“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02.

“Then, take the Hikari train which will leave at 9:02.

This one will arrive Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier.”


Thisat one will arrive at Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier than the Kodama train.”

This one will arrive at Kyoto station 10 minutes earlier.”

“I’m in a hurry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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