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Dec. 21, 2022

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A little diary

It was so cold today that I didn’t want to get out of bed at all in the morning. I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video calls the day before. Maybe I was not accustomed to study in this way. Even though i was really studying, i found it difficult to be focused all the time. It takes time to adapt to such study mode for me.

I thought of a new method to be more productive. That is to compress the task into a few things. It’s not necessary to demand myself to finish a lot of tasks in a day. All i need to do is to focus on one or two stuffs and do them best. The efficiency is about the equality not just the amount.

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A lLittle dDiary

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

It was so cold today that I didn’t want to get out of bed at all in the morning.

I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online byvia video calls the day before.

Maybe I was not accustomed to study in this way.

Even though iI was really studying, i found it difficult to be focused all the time.

It takes time to adapt to such a study mode for me.

I thought of a new methodway to be more productive.

That is, to compress thea task into a few things.

It’s not necessary to demand of myself tohat I finish a lot of tasks in a day.

All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stuffthings and then do them bestwell.

The efficiency is about the equality and not just the amount.

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Very well written!

A little diary

It was so cold today that I didn’t want to get out of bed at all in the morning.

Yesterday, I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video calls the day before.

Maybe I was not accustomed to study in this way.

Even though iI was really studying, iI found it difficult to bestay focused all the time.

It takes me time to adapt to such study mode for me.

I thought of a new method tohat may be more productive.

That is to compress the task into a few things.

It’s not necessary to demandpush myself to finish a lot of tasks in aone day.

All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stufftasks and do them bestto the best of my ability.

The efficiency is about the equality not just the amount.

I am not sure I understand this sentence.

I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video callshat the day before.

Maybe I was not accustomed to studying in this way.

"used to" is more common and a little less formal than "accustomed to"

Even though iI was really studying, iI found it difficult to bestay focused all ththe whole time.

Be careful to capitalize the letter "I"

It takes tisome time for me to adapt to such study mode for methis mode of study.

That is to compresssplit the task into a few thingparts.

I'd combine this and the previous sentence: "I thought of a new method to be more productive, which is to split the task into a few parts."

Split = dividing something into multiple smaller pieces

It’s not necessary to demandforce myself to finish a lot of tasks in aone day.

Alternative: "demand of myself that I finish"

All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stuffthings and do them bestwell.

Alternative: "do them the best that I can"

The eEfficiency is about the equality, not just the amountquantity.

Feedback

Great job. :) I like your idea of not making yourself do too much work in one day.

It takes time to adapt to such study mode for me.


It takes tisome time for me to adapt to such study mode for methis mode of study.

It takes me time to adapt to such study mode for me.

It takes time to adapt to such a study mode for me.

I thought of a new method to be more productive.


I thought of a new method tohat may be more productive.

I thought of a new methodway to be more productive.

A little diary


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A lLittle dDiary

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

It was so cold today that I didn’t want to get out of bed at all in the morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video calls the day before.


I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video callshat the day before.

Yesterday, I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online by video calls the day before.

I had made an appointment with my friends to study together online byvia video calls the day before.

Maybe I was not accustomed to study in this way.


Maybe I was not accustomed to studying in this way.

"used to" is more common and a little less formal than "accustomed to"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Even though i was really studying, i found it difficult to be focused all the time.


Even though iI was really studying, iI found it difficult to bestay focused all ththe whole time.

Be careful to capitalize the letter "I"

Even though iI was really studying, iI found it difficult to bestay focused all the time.

Even though iI was really studying, i found it difficult to be focused all the time.

That is to compress the task into a few things.


That is to compresssplit the task into a few thingparts.

I'd combine this and the previous sentence: "I thought of a new method to be more productive, which is to split the task into a few parts." Split = dividing something into multiple smaller pieces

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is, to compress thea task into a few things.

It’s not necessary to demand myself to finish a lot of tasks in a day.


It’s not necessary to demandforce myself to finish a lot of tasks in aone day.

Alternative: "demand of myself that I finish"

It’s not necessary to demandpush myself to finish a lot of tasks in aone day.

It’s not necessary to demand of myself tohat I finish a lot of tasks in a day.

All i need to do is to focus on one or two stuffs and do them best.


All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stuffthings and do them bestwell.

Alternative: "do them the best that I can"

All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stufftasks and do them bestto the best of my ability.

All iI need to do is to focus on one or two stuffthings and then do them bestwell.

The efficiency is about the equality not just the amount.


The eEfficiency is about the equality, not just the amountquantity.

The efficiency is about the equality not just the amount.

I am not sure I understand this sentence.

The efficiency is about the equality and not just the amount.

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