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abc90377

June 1, 2024

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A Little Complaint

I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but very enough for me.
Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because it was gonna be a Gym.
I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?
Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery. I will call it a workout today.

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I was always wentMY GUESS: I used to go to the same shop to do my groceries, the. That shop was small, but very enoughit was adequate for me.

Last time I wentattempted tp go to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because iout of business. It was gconna beverted to a Ggym.

I was very shocked since there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so w. Why would we need another one be needed instead of athe former grocery shop?

OPTION A: Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.¶
OPTION B: Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes for my groceries
.

I will call it MY PREFERENCE: From today, I will get an extra workout today.

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Indeed. Here in Japan, number of grocery stores are being reduced.

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you very much!

I was always wentused to go to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but veryhad enough for me.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna be a Ggym.

I was very shocked; there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you very much!

A Little Complaint

I was always wentgo to the same shop to dobuy my groceries, the shop. It was small but very enough for mehad everything I needed.

LThe last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna being to be turned into a Ggym.

I was very shocked; there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion thise same block, so why would we need another onegym instead of a grocery shop?

NeverthelessAnyway, now I will need to walk for anotheran extra 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

I will call it a workout today.

I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but veryalways good enough for me.

I would say 'good enough' instead of 'very' but it makes it more negative so putting 'always' puts the shop in a more positive light in terms of its size and goods.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because it was gonna bing to become a Ggym.

I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

NeverthelessMoreover, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

'Nevertheless' doesn't really work, it can mean 'in spite of..' or 'in contrary..', 'Moreover' emphasises the disturbance of the grocery shop closing down.

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abc90377

June 3, 2024

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Thank you so much!

A Little Complaint

I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, t. The shop was small but very enough for me.

"enough" is not really qualifiable, either some thing is enough or it isn't.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna be a Gym.

"gonna" is very informal, and rarely written.

I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

I will call it a workout today.

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Nice job!

A Little Complaint


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I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but very enough for me.


I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, t. The shop was small but very enough for me.

"enough" is not really qualifiable, either some thing is enough or it isn't.

I was always went to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but veryalways good enough for me.

I would say 'good enough' instead of 'very' but it makes it more negative so putting 'always' puts the shop in a more positive light in terms of its size and goods.

I was always wentgo to the same shop to dobuy my groceries, the shop. It was small but very enough for mehad everything I needed.

I was always wentused to go to the same shop to do my groceries, the shop was small but veryhad enough for me.

I was always wentMY GUESS: I used to go to the same shop to do my groceries, the. That shop was small, but very enoughit was adequate for me.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because it was gonna be a Gym.


Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna be a Gym.

"gonna" is very informal, and rarely written.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because it was gonna bing to become a Ggym.

LThe last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna being to be turned into a Ggym.

Last time I went to the shop, I found out it was no longer availableopen because it was gonna be a Ggym.

Last time I wentattempted tp go to the shop, I found out it was no longer available because iout of business. It was gconna beverted to a Ggym.

I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?


I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

I was very shocked;there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

I was very shocked; there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion thise same block, so why would we need another onegym instead of a grocery shop?

I was very shocked; there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center ion this block, so why would we need another one instead of a grocery shop?

I was very shocked since there were at least two gyms and one big civic sports center in this block, so w. Why would we need another one be needed instead of athe former grocery shop?

Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery.


Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

NeverthelessMoreover, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

'Nevertheless' doesn't really work, it can mean 'in spite of..' or 'in contrary..', 'Moreover' emphasises the disturbance of the grocery shop closing down.

NeverthelessAnyway, now I will need to walk for anotheran extra 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.

OPTION A: Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery shopping.¶
OPTION B: Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes for my groceries
.

I will call it a workout today.


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I will call it MY PREFERENCE: From today, I will get an extra workout today.

Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery, I would call it a workout today.


Nevertheless, now I will need to walk for another 15 minutes to do my grocery, I will call it a workout today.


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