Jan. 21, 2023
A Letter to Valay
HELLO， Valya! I'm glad to hear from you. How are you today?O(∩_∩)O
Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week. We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today. We're busy buying New Year's goods. We bought some meat and nuts. I even got a new coat!
It's also snowy heavily today. Everywhere is white and cold! that's the first snow of this year in my city.
I saw that you had accepted my photo invatation, so we can share our photo to each other now! HAHA(＾－＾)
What are you doing these days? are you still on winter vacation now? I'm waiting for your reply.
Wish you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
A Letter to Valay
HELLO，ello, Valya!
There's no need to have Hello in all caps. Only one space is needed after a comma.
I'm glad to hear from you.
How are you today?O(∩_∩)O
Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week.
We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today.
We're busy buying New Year's goods.
We bought some meat and nuts.
I even got a new coat!
It's also snowying heavily today.
Everywhere is white and cold!
tThat's the first snow of this year in my city.
I saw that you had accepted my photo invaitation, so we can share our photo tos with each other now!
HAHA(＾－＾)
What are you doing these days?
aAre you still on winter vacation now?
There's no need to have 'now' in there.
I'm waiting for your reply.
WishI hope you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
When you wish for someone to have a good day, this is a little more natural way to say it.
Feedback
Well done! There weren't too many big mistakes and I understood what you were saying. There were only some things here and there.
As a quick side note, remember to capitalize letters after periods, exclamation marks and question marks.
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Wish you have a good day~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
When you wish for someone to have a good day, this is a little more natural way to say it. |
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HELLO， Valya! H There's no need to have Hello in all caps. Only one space is needed after a comma. |
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How are you today?O(∩_∩)O This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today is the Little New Year's Day in the north of China.٩(๑>◡<๑)۶ We will celebrate the Spring Festival in a week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We're going to have dumplings for lunch with my family today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We're busy buying New Year's goods. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We bought some meat and nuts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I even got a new coat! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's also snowy heavily today. It's also snow |
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Everywhere is white and cold! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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that's the first snow of this year in my city.
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I saw that you had accepted my photo invatation, so we can share our photo to each other now! I saw that you had accepted my photo inv |
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HAHA(＾－＾) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What are you doing these days? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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are you still on winter vacation now?
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I'm waiting for your reply. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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