We haveneed to stop using products that are tested ion animals.The society is using People will use any kind of product even if they don't know what procesethical standards it phassed gone through .

My objective with this letter is to make thegoal is to get schools to stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals .

Firstly off, animals that are used to test the products infor product testing are mistreated. They are kept in cages whileand are fed of badpoor quality food .

Many animals die  Aftsuffer living their whole lives kept in cages being guinea pigs until they dieas test subjects.

With this letterI want to make sure that our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products and we can make thisforce businessess to stop testing ion animals so that they can be   free av ornd have a normal lives.

To whom  it may concern,

We have to stop using products that are tested using animals.The s Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know what kind of process it passed through .

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals .

Firstly, animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages, while arebeing fed of bad quality food .

Many animals die  Aafter living their whole lives kept in cages, being guinea pigs until they die.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products and w. We can make thisese businessess stop testing in animals so they can be   free av ornd have a normal lives.

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We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

To wWhom  iIt mMay cConcern,

We usually capitalize it like this in the US.

We have to stop using products that are tested ion animals.The s Society is using any kind of product even if they don't know what process it passed through about the process through which it passed.

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals .

Firstly, animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages while arebeing fed of bad quality food .

Many animals die  Aafter living their whole lives kept in cages while being guinea pigs until they die.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn't use thisese kinds of products andso we can make thisese businessess stop testing ion animals so they can be   free av or have a normal lives.

To wWhom  iIt mMay cConcern,

We have toI would like to propose that our school stop using products that are tested ion animals.The s Society is using any kind of product, even if they don not know what process it passed through .

Avoid contractions in formal writing. Also, make clear that you want to create this change in your school specifically.

My objective with this letter is to make the school stop using products that are chemically tested ion animals .

FirstlyThe animals that are used to test the products in are kept in cages while areand fed of bad quality food .

I would avoid using the "first..." introduction, because this seems to be your main point instead of one of a series of points.

Many animals die  A after living their whole lives kept in cages being guinea pigs until they dieexperimented on.

It is best to avoid the "guinea pig" metaphor when you're already talking about animals.

With this letter I want to make sure our school doesn' not use thisese kinds of products, and we can make thisese businessess stop testing ion animals, so they can be   free av or have a normal lives.

Have a nice day.

I would say something like "Thank you for your consideration of my proposal" and then include how they can contact you to discuss your proposal.