Jan. 27, 2023
A Letter to El
Hello El! How's it going recently?
Thank you for your blessing! Yes, we're still on winter vacation. The Lantern Festival will come in 10 days. And we will come back to school the next day. haha~There will be an important exam soom, so I must review hard these days.
We went to the mountains yesterday. There was snow and heavy wind everywhere( Although there was no snow for many days in the city!). But the scenery in the mountains is really beautiful! And the steps are very slippery. Luckily, I didn't fall down, haha^_^ I also send a photo with this letter. So you can see them, too.(*^▽^*)
You said that your Franch teacher has gone to Canada. So are you in Canada now? I wonder what your trip will be like, and I hope you can go to Paris one day~
I heard that "H" is not pronounced in French. For example, read "help" as "elp" in French. Is that true? HAHA
Oh It doesn't matter~ Sounds like you were having a great time in carnival. I saw there was a tiny plastic baby in your cake! That's interesting! So did you buy the next king cake?
I think you might in the Jazz Band, isn't? What Instrument can you play? Maybe we can send a recording in Slowly~
Thank you for your praise!!! Yes, we have English lessons at school everyday. I'm not a real top student at school, but my grades of each subjects isn't bad. My English teacher is really good at gramma and vocabulary, but his oral English is not as good as his gramma. He's hard-working and helpful, and always ready to help his students with English. When I wrote the last letter, my friend Xue helped me correct some gramma and spelling mistakes( Thanks for his correction! ).HAHA His English is a little bit better than mine.
I’m writing something about how to learn mandarin. Please wait for me. ☺️I will send it to you when I write the next letter.
What are you doing at school these days? Did you go anywhere interesting?
I'm waiting for your reply~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
A Letter to El
Hello El!
How's it going recently?
Thank you for your blessing!
Yes, we're still on winter vacation.
The Lantern Festival will come in 10 daysIn ten days it will be the Lantern Festival.
Your first way is perfectly fine, but I think my correction is a bit more natural.
And we will comego back to school the next day.
haha~There will be an important exam soom, so I must review hard these days.
We went to the mountains yesterday.
There was snow and heavy wind everywhere( Although there was no snow for many days in the city!).
But the scenery in the mountains is really beautiful!
And the steps are very slippery.
Luckily, I didn't fall down, haha^_^ I also send a photo with this letter.
So you can see them, too.
This should be part of the above sentence, connected with a comma.
(*^▽^*)
You said that your Fraench teacher has gone to Canada.
So are you in Canada now?
I wonder what your trip will be like, and I hope you can go to Paris one day~
I heard that "H" is not pronounced in French.
For example, read "help" as "elp" in French.
Is that true?
HAHA
Oh It doesn't matter~ Sounds like you were having a great time in cat Carniaval.
I saw there was a tiny plastic baby in your cake!
That's interesting!
So did you buy the next king cake?
I think you might in the Jazz Band, isn'right?
What Instrument cando you play?
The original version is fine. It's a bit more natural to use "do" in this context, because you're asking specifically if he plays an instrument as part of a band, not if he is able to play an instrument in the abstract sense.
Maybe weyou can send me a recording in Slowly~
Thank you for your praise!!!
Yes, we have English lessons at school everyday.
I'm not a real top student at school, but my grades ofin each subjects is aren't bad.
My English teacher is really good at grammar and vocabulary, but his oral English is not as good as his grammar.
He's hard-working and helpful, and always ready to help his students with English.
When I wrote the last letter, my friend Xue helped me correct some grammar and spelling mistakes ( Thanks for his correction! ).HAHA His English is a little bit better than mine.
I’m writing something about how to learn mMandarin.
Please wait for me.
☺️I will send it to you when I write the next letter.
What are you doing at school these days?
Did you go anywhere interesting?
I'm waiting for your reply~ღ( ´･ᴗ･` )
Feedback
Very few mistakes, excellent job!
Jan. 28, 2023
Thanks for your correction!!!💗
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Thank you for your blessing! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Lantern Festival will come in 10 days.
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And we will come back to school the next day. And we will |
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haha~There will be an important exam soom, so I must review hard these days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And the steps are very slippery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Luckily, I didn't fall down, haha^_^ I also send a photo with this letter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You said that your Franch teacher has gone to Canada. You said that your Fr |
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I wonder what your trip will be like, and I hope you can go to Paris one day~ This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I heard that "H" is not pronounced in French. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, read "help" as "elp" in French. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Is that true? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Oh It doesn't matter~ Sounds like you were having a great time in carnival. Oh It doesn't matter~ Sounds like you were having a great time |
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So did you buy the next king cake? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think you might in the Jazz Band, isn't? I think you might in the Jazz Band, |
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What Instrument can you play? What Instrument The original version is fine. It's a bit more natural to use "do" in this context, because you're asking specifically if he plays an instrument as part of a band, not if he is able to play an instrument in the abstract sense. |
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Maybe we can send a recording in Slowly~ Maybe |
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Thank you for your praise!!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, we have English lessons at school everyday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm not a real top student at school, but my grades of each subjects isn't bad. I'm not a real top student at school, but my grades |
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My English teacher is really good at gramma and vocabulary, but his oral English is not as good as his gramma. My English teacher is really good at grammar and vocabulary, but his oral English is not as good as his grammar. |
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He's hard-working and helpful, and always ready to help his students with English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I wrote the last letter, my friend Xue helped me correct some gramma and spelling mistakes( Thanks for his correction! ).HAHA His English is a little bit better than mine. When I wrote the last letter, my friend Xue helped me correct some grammar and spelling mistakes ( Thanks for his correction! ).HAHA His English is a little bit better than mine. |
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I’m writing something about how to learn mandarin. I’m writing something about how to learn |
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Please wait for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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☺️I will send it to you when I write the next letter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What are you doing at school these days? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Did you go anywhere interesting? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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