MaybeDo you remember thate boy who tired to snatch your bag on the street 20 years ago.

And we have had a child.

I’m not the boy who no body cares about.

Dear Mrs. Jones.,

Maybe you remember that boy who tiried to snatch your bag on the street 20 years ago.

To this day.,

I still remember the teachings that you giave to me.

From then on, I never stole again, no matter how hard life I hadwas.

In tThe day after I left your apartment, I found a job inat a restaurant.

I bought a food truck with themy first money I gotsalary.

Sounds a bit more natural this way.

Now, I gotam married.

I’m not longer the boy who no body cares about.

All of thatis is because of you.

Dear Mrs. Jones.,

Maybe youYou might remember that boy who tiried to snatch your bag on the street 20 years ago.

To this day.,

I still remember the teachings that you giave to me.

From then on, I never stole again, no matter how hard life I had gotten/turned.

In tThe day after I left your apartment, I found a job inat a restaurant.

Now I got'm married.

Use "now" with the present tense

And we have a child.

It might sound better to write "And my spouse and I have a child."

I’m not the boy no body cares about.

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Roger.

Dear Mrs Jones.,

Maybe you remember that boy who tiried to snatch your bag on the street 20 years ago.

To this day.

To this day, I still remember the teachings that you giave to me.

Alternative:
To this day, I still remember the lessons you taught me.

Your hard work has profoundly affected me.

From then on, I never stole again no matter how hard my life I hadwas.

Now I gotam married and we have a child.

And we have a child.

I’m not the boy no body cares about.