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Jack

May 27, 2022

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A Letter

Hi, Cleone, how are you?

I think that you would feel very sudden and wouldn't know who I was when you received this letter.

In the middle of July, 2020, I was eager to find an English teacher to help me with my English writing (at that time I thought if I could write well then I could speak well), and fortunately, I came across you. After you learned about what I wrote in English, you told me that you prefer to proofread formal academic papers, but you recommended me the LC site.

I immediately registered in the LC, and started practicing writing in English. What an amazing site! People there worked hard and seriously, and everyone's writing could be corrected very quickly by native speakers.

I have been learning there for almost two years. I believe that I have made a lot of progress. I am always grateful to you and the site.

I have talked about you to my English teachers many times when it comes to my English learning. Just yesterday, I mentioned you again, and I said that I must book a few lessons from you someday to show my gratitude.

So this morning, I looked for you in Italki. It's not hard work to find you because I added you to my favorite teachers. Unfortunately, your schedule is not available, and the website showed that you were on vacation.

That is why I wrote this letter to you. Hopefully, you will have the chance to read it. Anyway, thank you very much for telling me about the LC site. You are a very kind and helpful person, and I hope all the best for you and your family.

Sincerely
Jack
On the afternoon of May 27 th, 2022.

Corrections

Hi, Cleone, how are you?

I think that you would feel very sudden and wouldn't knowPerhaps you may be surprised and not recognize who I wasam when you receiveding this letter.

In the middle of July, in 2020, I was eager to find an English teacher to help me with my English writing (at that time, I thought that if I could write well, then I could speak well too), and fortunately, I came across you.

After you learned about what I wrote in English, although you told me that you preferred to proofread formal academic papers, but you recommended me to the LC site.

I immediately registered ion the LC, and started practicing writing in English.

People there worked hard and seriously, and everyone's writing couldan be corrected very quickly by native speakers.

I am always grateful to you and theat site.

I have talked aboutmentioned you to my English teachers many times when it coames to my English learning.

"English" being repeated twice is a bit redundant. While I chose to delete the one before "learning", you can also keep that one in and remove the one before "teachers" to more or less the same effect.

So this morning, I looked for you ion Italki.

It's no wasn't hard work to find you because I had added you to my favorite teachers.

Unfortunately, your schedule iwas not available, and the website showed that you were on vacation.

That is why I'm wroteiting this letter to you.

Anyways, thank you very much for telling me about the LC site.

You are a very kind and helpful person, and I hopewish all the best for you and your family.

Sincerely,

On the afternoon of May 27 th, 2022.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 27, 2022

1

Thank you very much for correcting my journals.

Hi Cleone, how are you?

Perhaps you may be surprised and not recognize who I am when receiving this letter.

In the middle of July in 2020, I was eager to find an English teacher to help me with my English writing (at that time, I thought that if I could write well, then I could speak well too), and fortunately, I came across you. After you learned about what I wrote in English, although you told me that you preferred to proofread formal academic papers, you recommended me to the LC site.

I immediately registered on LC and started practicing writing in English. What an amazing site! People there work hard and seriously, and everyone's writing can be corrected very quickly by native speakers.

I have been learning there for almost two years. I believe that I have made a lot of progress. I am always grateful to you and that site.

I have mentioned you to my English teachers many times when it came to my learning. Just yesterday, I mentioned you again, and I said that I must book a few lessons from you someday to show my gratitude.

So this morning, I looked for you on Italki. It wasn’t hard to find you because I had added you to my favorite teachers. Unfortunately, your schedule was not available, and the website showed that you were on vacation.

That is why I am writing this letter to you. Hopefully, you will have the chance to read it. Always, thank you very much for telling me about the LC site. You are a very kind and helpful person, and I wish all the best for you and your family.

Sincerely,
Jack
On the afternoon of May 27 th, 2022.

A Letter


Hi, Cleone, how are you?


Hi, Cleone, how are you?

I think that you would feel very sudden and wouldn't know who I was when you received this letter.


I think that you would feel very sudden and wouldn't knowPerhaps you may be surprised and not recognize who I wasam when you receiveding this letter.

In the middle of July, 2020, I was eager to find an English teacher to help me with my English writing (at that time I thought if I could write well then I could speak well), and fortunately, I came across you.


In the middle of July, in 2020, I was eager to find an English teacher to help me with my English writing (at that time, I thought that if I could write well, then I could speak well too), and fortunately, I came across you.

After you learned about what I wrote in English, you told me that you prefer to proofread formal academic papers, but you recommended me the LC site.


After you learned about what I wrote in English, although you told me that you preferred to proofread formal academic papers, but you recommended me to the LC site.

I immediately registered in the LC, and started practicing writing in English.


I immediately registered ion the LC, and started practicing writing in English.

What an amazing site!


People there worked hard and seriously, and everyone's writing could be corrected very quickly by native speakers.


People there worked hard and seriously, and everyone's writing couldan be corrected very quickly by native speakers.

I have been learning there for almost two years.


I believe that I have made a lot of progress.


I am always grateful to you and the site.


I am always grateful to you and theat site.

I have talked about you to my English teachers many times when it comes to my English learning.


I have talked aboutmentioned you to my English teachers many times when it coames to my English learning.

"English" being repeated twice is a bit redundant. While I chose to delete the one before "learning", you can also keep that one in and remove the one before "teachers" to more or less the same effect.

Just yesterday, I mentioned you again, and I said that I must book a few lessons from you someday to show my gratitude.


So this morning, I looked for you in Italki.


So this morning, I looked for you ion Italki.

It's not hard work to find you because I added you to my favorite teachers.


It's no wasn't hard work to find you because I had added you to my favorite teachers.

Unfortunately, your schedule is not available, and the website showed that you were on vacation.


Unfortunately, your schedule iwas not available, and the website showed that you were on vacation.

That is why I wrote this letter to you.


That is why I'm wroteiting this letter to you.

Hopefully, you will have the chance to read it.


Anyway, thank you very much for telling me about the LC site.


Anyways, thank you very much for telling me about the LC site.

You are a very kind and helpful person, and I hope all the best for you and your family.


You are a very kind and helpful person, and I hopewish all the best for you and your family.

Sincerely


Sincerely,

Jack


On the afternoon of May 27 th, 2022.


On the afternoon of May 27 th, 2022.

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