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April 9, 2022

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A Letter

Dear Lisa

I miss you so much and I would like explain everything about the school and what all happend without you. First you have right my parents are disvored my dad has cheated my mom and I and my mom are so happly. My dad was really bad and my mom see finally her true face. But that is not all my mother married again. Her new boyfriend is really nice and smart . He can cooks cleans and he helps me with my homework. His name is Tom he is a doctor. But the school is terrible my boyfriend broke up with me for lisa the means girl in the school . All while she is so beautiful and the captain from chearleder team. That is not fair she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father I can not do anything. But great news I will a big sister by mom is pregnant the rest come later .




Bye lisa

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A Letter

Dear Lisa

I miss you so much and I would to like explain everything about the school and what alleverything that happend without you.

First you havare right, my parents are disvorced m. My dad has cheated on my mom and I and my mom are so happly.y to see him gone.

If he "cheated your mom" it might mean he tricked her out of money or something.
If he "cheated on your mom" it means he slept with another woman.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersaw his true face.

But that is not all my mother married again.

Her new boyfriend is really nice and smart .

He can cooks and cleans and he helps me with my homework.

Or "he can cook and clean and he helps me with my homework."

His name is Tom, he is a doctor.

But the school is terrible m. My boyfriend broke up with me for lLisa, the meansest girl in the school .

All wWhile she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the chearleder team.,

That is not fair she is also evil and selfish but it is the school from her father. But her father owns the school so I can not do anything.

the "while... also..." needs to be part of the same sentence.

But great news, I will be a big sister b! My mom is pregnant the rest come later .!

I don't know what "rest come later" is refering to.

You can use exclaimation marks (!) to show excitement or anger, just like how question marks (?) show a questioning tone.

Bye lLisa

Names should always have the first letter capitalised.

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So dramatic! I don't know if this is truth or fiction, but either way well done!

I miss you so much and I would like to explain everything about the school and what alleverything that happened without you.

Firstly, you havare right m. My parents are disvorced, my dad has cheated on my mom and I. Me and my mom are so happly.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersees his true face.

But that is not all, my mother married again.

Her new boyfriend is really nice and smart .

He can cooks, cleans, and he helps me with my homework.

His name is Tom, he is a doctor.

But the school is terrible, my boyfriend broke up with me for lisa, the means girl in the school .

All while she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the cheaerleader team.

That is not fair, she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father, I can not do anything.

But great news I will be a big sister b, my mom is pregnant, the rest will come later .

Dear Lisa,

I miss you so much and I would like explainto tell you everything about the school and weverything that allhas happened without you.

First, you havare right my parents are disvorced my dad has cheated on my mom and I and my mom and I are so happly.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersees his true face.

He can cooks, cleans and he helps me with my homework.

But the school is terrible my boyfriend broke up withleft me for lisa the means girl in the school .

All while she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the cheaerleader team.

ThaIt is not fair she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father's school I can not do anything.

But great news I will be a big sister by mom is pregnant the rest will come later .

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Dear Lisa


Dear Lisa,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I miss you so much and I would like explain everything about the school and what all happend without you.


I miss you so much and I would like explainto tell you everything about the school and weverything that allhas happened without you.

I miss you so much and I would like to explain everything about the school and what alleverything that happened without you.

I miss you so much and I would to like explain everything about the school and what alleverything that happend without you.

First you have right my parents are disvored my dad has cheated my mom and I and my mom are so happly.


First, you havare right my parents are disvorced my dad has cheated on my mom and I and my mom and I are so happly.

Firstly, you havare right m. My parents are disvorced, my dad has cheated on my mom and I. Me and my mom are so happly.

First you havare right, my parents are disvorced m. My dad has cheated on my mom and I and my mom are so happly.y to see him gone.

If he "cheated your mom" it might mean he tricked her out of money or something. If he "cheated on your mom" it means he slept with another woman.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally her true face.


My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersees his true face.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersees his true face.

My dad was really bad and my mom see finally hersaw his true face.

But that is not all my mother married again.


But that is not all, my mother married again.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Her new boyfriend is really nice and smart .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He can cooks cleans and he helps me with my homework.


He can cooks, cleans and he helps me with my homework.

He can cooks, cleans, and he helps me with my homework.

He can cooks and cleans and he helps me with my homework.

Or "he can cook and clean and he helps me with my homework."

His name is Tom he is a doctor.


His name is Tom, he is a doctor.

His name is Tom, he is a doctor.

But the school is terrible my boyfriend broke up with me for lisa the means girl in the school .


But the school is terrible my boyfriend broke up withleft me for lisa the means girl in the school .

But the school is terrible, my boyfriend broke up with me for lisa, the means girl in the school .

But the school is terrible m. My boyfriend broke up with me for lLisa, the meansest girl in the school .

All while she is so beautiful and the captain from chearleder team.


All while she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the cheaerleader team.

All while she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the cheaerleader team.

All wWhile she is so beautiful and the captain fromof the chearleder team.,

That is not fair she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father I can not do anything.


ThaIt is not fair she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father's school I can not do anything.

That is not fair, she is so evil and selfish but it is the school from her father, I can not do anything.

That is not fair she is also evil and selfish but it is the school from her father. But her father owns the school so I can not do anything.

the "while... also..." needs to be part of the same sentence.

But great news I will a big sister by mom is pregnant the rest come later .


But great news I will be a big sister by mom is pregnant the rest will come later .

But great news I will be a big sister b, my mom is pregnant, the rest will come later .

But great news, I will be a big sister b! My mom is pregnant the rest come later .!

I don't know what "rest come later" is refering to. You can use exclaimation marks (!) to show excitement or anger, just like how question marks (?) show a questioning tone.

Bye lisa


Bye lLisa

Names should always have the first letter capitalised.

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