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kiwy

Sept. 4, 2021

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Hey, I saw some fireflies on my way back home tonight.
There are many stars in the sky now, please have a look, then we are sharing the starry night.
Wanna have a trip in the field with you next time.

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A Letter

Hey, I saw some fireflies on my way back home tonight.

There are many stars in the sky now, please have a look, thenat we aremight sharinge theis starry night.

Made it a little more poetic. There's an implied "so" between "look" and "that."

Wanna have a trip in the field with you next time.

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kiwy

Sept. 4, 2021

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Hey, I saw some fireflies on my way back home tonight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are many stars in the sky now, please have a look, then we are sharing the starry night.


There are many stars in the sky now, please have a look, thenat we aremight sharinge theis starry night.

Made it a little more poetic. There's an implied "so" between "look" and "that."

Wanna have a trip in the field with you next time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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