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Jack

Feb. 16, 2021

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Personally, I think China's climate is better than Canada's in terms of the weather alone. Whenever I hear the temperature of minus thirty or forty degrees, I can't imagine how to spend it.
As I said before, at least for me, the new year is more like an ordinary day, and I also hope it's an ordinary day. I don't want it to bring me undue burden.
Today is my first day on duty after the new year. I saw the Phalaenopsis that someone gave us before the new year in my office. It was really beautiful. I will take a picture of it and send it to you later.
Could you please tell me the place you work at? I really want to know, I like to understand it through maps.
I've always been very grateful for all the help you give in the process of my English learning, and here I would like to say to you sincerely: thank you so much!

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Personally, I think China's climate is better than Canada's in terms of the weather alone.

Whenever I hear the temperature of minus thirty or forty degrees, I can't imagine how to spend it.

Unsure what this sentence means --- 'I can't imagine how to spend it'. Do you mean 'I can't imagine how you would spend a day that cold?' or 'I can't imagine how you cope with the cold'?

As I said before, at least for me, the new year is more like an ordinary day, and I also hope it's an ordinary day.

I don't want it to bring me undue burden.

Today is my first day on duty after the new year.

I saw the Phalaenopsis that someone gave us before the new year in my office.

It was really beautiful.

I will take a picture of it and send it to you later.

Could you please tell me the place you work at?

'Show' sounds more polite than 'tell' here :)

I really want to know, I like to understand it through maps.

'I like to understand things through maps' or 'I like to understand through maps' --- No 'it' needed :)

I've always been very grateful for all the help you give in the process of my English learning, and here I would like to say to you sincerely: thank you so much!

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Jack

Feb. 17, 2021

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Whenever I hear the temperature of minus thirty or forty degrees, I can't imagine how to spend it.

Yes. That is what I mean.

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Personally, I think China's climate is better than Canada's in terms of the weather alone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Whenever I hear the temperature of minus thirty or forty degrees, I can't imagine how to spend it.


Whenever I hear the temperature of minus thirty or forty degrees, I can't imagine how to spend it.

Unsure what this sentence means --- 'I can't imagine how to spend it'. Do you mean 'I can't imagine how you would spend a day that cold?' or 'I can't imagine how you cope with the cold'?

As I said before, at least for me, the new year is more like an ordinary day, and I also hope it's an ordinary day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't want it to bring me undue burden.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is my first day on duty after the new year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I saw the Phalaenopsis that someone gave us before the new year in my office.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was really beautiful.


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I will take a picture of it and send it to you later.


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Could you please tell me the place you work at?


Could you please tell me the place you work at?

'Show' sounds more polite than 'tell' here :)

I really want to know, I like to understand it through maps.


I really want to know, I like to understand it through maps.

'I like to understand things through maps' or 'I like to understand through maps' --- No 'it' needed :)

I've always been very grateful for all the help you give in the process of my English learning, and here I would like to say to you sincerely: thank you so much!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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