May 10, 2024
I’ve ordered a humidifier. I spent a lot of time on it. I was searching articles and reviews and reading them for 2 or 3 days. I couldn’t decide how much money I could spend on this thing. Do I need a simple humidifier or an advanced one? Is a humidifier needed in summer? I am concerned that I will spend a lot of money and won’t use it. I was afraid I would lose money. Again I checked the level of humidity in my room — 25%. The optimal level is 45-55%. But I remembered last summer it was very hot and humid in my room. Finally, I ordered a high-quality but expensive humidifier. But now I doubt if I made the right decision. Do I need to cancel the order and buy a cheaper model?
A humidifier
I’veSUGGESTION: Add a time marker. Indicate *when* you ordered the humidifier.¶
MY GUESS: Recently I ordered a humidifier.
(The original is possible, but vague. Adding a time marker maker makes it more natural.)
MY GUESS: I spent a lot of time on itsearching for the right one.
For the last 2 or 3 days, I was searching articles and reviews and reading them for 2 or 3 daysbout which humidifier to buy.
I couldn’t decidMoreover, I was unsure how much money I couldto spend on this thing.
Do I need a simple humidifierShould I buy a simple or an advanced onefeature-laden humidifier?
Is aAre humidifiers needed in the summer in [name of the country you live in]?
NOTE: Many readers do not know which country you are in. In Japan or Taiwan, humidifiers are probably are NOT needed. However, in the Middle-East or some parts of western China, maybe they are.
ALSO POSSIBLE: I am concerned that I willabout spending a lot of money and won’t use ifor a unnessary gadget.
I was afraid I would loseMY GUESS: Would it amount to a waste of money.?
SUGGESTION: Express this idea through a rhetorical question.
A new humidifier
I’ve ordered a humidifier.
I spent a lot of time on itdeciding on which one to buy.
Otherwise, "I spent a lot of time with it" it sounds like you repaired it or spent a lot of time assembling it
I was searchinghad been reading up on articles and reviews and reading them for 2 or 3 days.
I couldn’t decide on how much money I cshould spend on ithis thing.
Do I need a simple humidifier or an advanced one?
IsDo I even need a humidifier needed inin the summer?
I am concerned that I will spend a lot of money and won’t use it.
I was afraid I would loswaste money.
Again, I checked the level of humidity in my room —: 25%.
But I remembered last summer it was veryhow hot and humid it was in my room last summer.
Finally, I ordered a high-quality but expensive humidifier.
But now I'm doubting if I made the right decision.
Do I need to cancel the order and buy a cheaper model?
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I think even if you don't use the humidifier so much in the summer, you'll definitely use it more often in fall and winter.
I also always feel guilty about ordering new things, haha! But when it comes to household appliances, I tend to spend more money on high-quality products.
I am concerned that I will spendt a lot of money andbut won’t use it.
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I’ve ordered a humidifier. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
(The original is possible, but vague. Adding a time marker maker makes it more natural.) |
I spent a lot of time on it. I spent a lot of time Otherwise, "I spent a lot of time with it" it sounds like you repaired it or spent a lot of time assembling it MY GUESS: I spent a lot of time on |
I was searching articles and reviews and reading them for 2 or 3 days. I For the last 2 or 3 days, I was searching articles and reviews a
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I couldn’t decide how much money I could spend on this thing. I couldn’t decide on how much money I
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Do I need a simple humidifier or an advanced one? This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Is a humidifier needed in summer?
NOTE: Many readers do not know which country you are in. In Japan or Taiwan, humidifiers are probably are NOT needed. However, in the Middle-East or some parts of western China, maybe they are. |
I am concerned that I will spend a lot of money and won’t use it. I am concerned that I Changed to past tense so it fits with the rest of the writing This sentence has been marked as perfect! ALSO POSSIBLE: I am concerned |
I was afraid I would lose money. I was afraid I would
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Again I checked the level of humidity in my room — 25%. Again, I checked the level of humidity in my room |
But I remembered last summer it was very hot and humid in my room. But I remembered |
The optimal level is 45-55%. |
Finally, I ordered a high-quality but expensive humidifier. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
But now I doubt if I made the right decision. But now I'm doubting if I made the right decision. |
Do I need to cancel the order and buy a cheaper model? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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