Sept. 23, 2023
A Hilarious and Ridiculous Bully in My Eyes
I’m a middle school student. Somehow I feel like I have very childish classmates. I’m not saying how mature I am. I just want to see if you think so too.
It’s all because of a boy in my class. Let’s call him TY.
TY is the person who will always make a normal conversation dirty. He’s also a bit annoying. For example, after hearing a question from the teacher, he’d suddenly yell out sth not related. What’s more, sometimes, he is rude. But, despite of all of these things, he’s not the bad- minded guy who should have been bullied and disgusted. He’s kind. He’s also good at sports. He can play the piano pretty well and he adores playing basketball. What’s wrong with this person in spite of being a bit weird?
It seems many of my girls classmates don’t agree with my opinion at all. (I didn’t say it out, but I can sense it) Tonight, Girl 1 shared a post on WeChat Moments (something similar to Facebook, but posts only visitable by friends). It was a long article and the main idea was complaining how unreasonable and disgusting TY was. She made screenshots and left comments after every of them. She was mad at this. (TY) Also, a chat group with 36 of our schoolmates was also talking about TY. Some of the people said that they wanted him to leave our class the next year. Someone even said she wanted to add TY to friends in order to curse him. After that, several other girls posted their own posts, videos and complaints. “Good news” is our monitor was in it as well. She sent the videos. Most importantly, it was midnight in China.
I’d sneer to this. Judging people is the thing that I hate most. So are you?
我是个中学生。不知道为什么，我总觉得我同学特别幼稚。我不是说自己有多么成熟，只是想看看你是不是也这么想的。
这都是一个我们班上的男生引起的。我们叫他TY吧。
TY是一个总是会让正常的谈话变得龌龊的人。他也有点烦人，举例说，当他听到老师提的一个问题以后，他会突然大叫一声跟这个毫无关系的词。不仅如此，他还有点粗鲁。但是，尽管这所有的他的所作所为，他不是一个活该被霸凌和叫人厌恶的坏人。他很善良，擅长体育运动，弹钢琴相当不错，并且非常喜欢打篮球。这个人除了有些怪，还能怎么了？
看起来我的女同学们不支持我的观点啊。（我没说出来，但是我可以感觉到）今晚，女生1号发了一个微信朋友圈（和Facebook脸书有点像，但是发的东西仅好友可见）。那篇文章很长，主要内容就是抱怨TY有多离谱和恶心。她截图，在每张截图后面发表了评论。她对此（TY）很生气。还有，有我们三十六个校友的一个聊天群里也在说TY。有些人说，她们想要下个学年让TY离开我们班。有人甚至说她想加TY微信好友，这样就可以骂他了。在这之后，又有几个女生发了她们自己的朋友圈和视频。“好消息”是我们班长也参与其中。她发的这些视频。最重要的是，当时在中国是大半夜。
我对此持冷笑反应。批判别人是我最讨厌的行为。你也讨厌吗？
I’m a middle school student.
Somehow I feel like I have very childish classmates.
Sometimes I feel like my classmates can be very childish.
He can play the piano pretty well and he adores playing basketball.
He can play the piano pretty well; he's also good at basketball.
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“hilarious” can sometimes carry a negative connotation, but that’s not possible in this case
I’m a middle school student.
Somehowtimes I feel like I have very childishimmature classmates.
I’m not saying howI’m mature I am.,
I just want to see if you think so too.
It’s all because ofThere’s a boy in my class.,
TY is the perssomeone who will always make a normal conversation dirty.
He’s also a bit annoying.
For example, after hearing a question from the teacher, he’dll suddenly yell out sth not related.
What’s more,: sometimes, he is rude.
But, despite of all of these things, he’s not theas bad- minded guy who should have been bullied and disgust of a guy as it would seem, and certainly not someone who deserves to be met with disgust or bullied.
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He’s kind.
He’s also good at sports.
He can play the piano pretty well and he adorloves playing basketball.
What’s wrong with this person in spite of being a bit weirdSure, he’s a bit weird, but what’s wrong with that?
It seems many of my girls classmates don’t agree with my opinion at all.
(I didn’t say it out loud, but I can sense it) Tonight, Girl 1 shared a post on WeChat Moments (something similar to Facebook, but where posts are only visitable byto friends).
It was a long article and the main idea wasthat mainly complaininged about how unreasonable and disgusting TY was.
She made screenshots and left comments aftunder every of them.
She was mad at thism.
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Some of the peoplem said that they wanted him to leave our class the next year.
Someone even said she wanted to add TY to her friends in order to curse him out.
“GThe good news” is that our monitor was in it as well.
She sent the videos.
Most importantly, it was midnight in China.
I’d sneer to thisThis gave me a good chuckle.
I’ve almost never seen “sneer” used in this context, but my suggestion is very common (of course there are many alternatives).
Judging people is the thing that I hate the most.
So areWhat about you?
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This is pretty good! We certainly don’t know people as well as we’d like to think sometimes, and it’s good that you can sense when people are being too judgemental. Very compassionate.
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A Hilarious and Ridiculous Bully in My Eyes A “hilarious” can sometimes carry a negative connotation, but that’s not possible in this case |
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I’m a middle school student. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Somehow I feel like I have very childish classmates. Some Somehow I feel like I have very childish classmates. Sometimes I feel like my classmates can be very childish. |
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I’m not saying how mature I am. I’m not saying |
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I just want to see if you think so too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It’s all because of a boy in my class.
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Let’s call him TY. |
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TY is the person who will always make a normal conversation dirty. TY is |
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He’s also a bit annoying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, after hearing a question from the teacher, he’d suddenly yell out sth not related. For example, after hearing a question from the teacher, he’ |
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What’s more, sometimes, he is rude. What’s more |
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But, despite of all of these things, he’s not the bad- minded guy who should have been bullied and disgusted. But, despite of all of these things, he’s not re-wrote to sound more native but maintain the meaning |
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He’s also good at sports. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He can play the piano pretty well and he adores playing basketball. He can play the piano pretty well and he He can play the piano pretty well and he adores playing basketball. He can play the piano pretty well; he's also good at basketball. |
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What’s wrong with this person in spite of being a bit weird?
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It seems many of my girls classmates don’t agree with my opinion at all. It seems many of my girl |
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(I didn’t say it out, but I can sense it) Tonight, Girl 1 shared a post on WeChat Moments (something similar to Facebook, but posts only visitable by friends). (I didn’t say it out loud, but I can sense it) Tonight, Girl 1 shared a post on WeChat Moments (something similar to Facebook, but where posts are only visi |
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It was a long article and the main idea was complaining how unreasonable and disgusting TY was. It was a long article |
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She made screenshots and left comments after every of them. She made screenshots and left comments |
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She was mad at this. She was mad at |
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(TY) Also, a chat group with 36 of our schoolmates was also talking about TY.
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Some of the people said that they wanted him to leave our class the next year. Some of the |
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Someone even said she wanted to add TY to friends in order to curse him. Someone even said she wanted to add TY to her friends in order to curse him out. |
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After that, several other girls posted their own posts, videos and complaints. |
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“Good news” is our monitor was in it as well.
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She sent the videos. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most importantly, it was midnight in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’d sneer to this.
I’ve almost never seen “sneer” used in this context, but my suggestion is very common (of course there are many alternatives). |
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Judging people is the thing that I hate most. Judging people is the thing that I hate the most. |
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So are you?
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