March 8, 2025
A High school
I passed a high school few days ago.
When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother.
Thank you for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.
私は数日前受験に合格した。
私が合格の通知を受け取ったとき、私は母と一緒に喜んだ。
母の助けには感謝しているし、私は外国語を勉強するのを頑張る。
A HBETTER TITLE: Passing by a high school
QUESTION: Was it the high school that you once attended? If so, this wording is possible:
Passing by my high school
もし、あなたの高校だったらです: I passed my high school few days ago.¶
あなたが通っていない高校の場合: I passed a high school few days ago.
Was this in your hometown? If so, perhaps this wording -
I passed a high school in my home town few days ago.
When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my motMY GUESS: When I notified my mother, I felt so much appreciation for her.
So did you recently pass a high school entrance examination?
Thank you for my mother’s help and encourage, I will study foreign languages harder.
QUESTION: Besides English, what languages are you studying? Chinese and English? French and English?
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So you have entered a "good" high school?
March 12, 2025
Thank you for your kindness!
I passed a high school with a foreign language class, I can choose English and German or French or Chinese.
I think I choose Chinese classes.
Thank you for your kindness.
I passed a high school few days ago.
I passed high school few days ago.
When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother.
When I was told about/got the results, My mother and I were so happy
Thank youI am grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.
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"a high school" refers to one particular "high school" that is introduced for the first time. In the context you are using it, it really "mean" "passing a set of exams", and so the idea is of "high school" in general, not your particular high school that you attended. "To pass high school" is understood as meaning "passing the (majority of) the exams in the last year of secondary school".
"When I gave passed message" - the verb "give" means you give it to someone else - but it is you who receives the good news about your exam results. So, the verb should be "receive". You can simply say "to get", and since you are referring to the great news of passing your exams, you can say "When I got the results", or even more simply "When I found out that I passed", or "When they told me I passed" etc.
"So happy with my mother". I am guessing that you mean both you and your mother were happy about the results. So "My mother and I" is the subject of "to be happy".
"Thank you for my mother's help". I think you are referring to the fact that your mother helped you pass. The verb we use for feeling thankful is "to be grateful". You could also say "I am thankful for my mother's help".
A great attempt. It might look like a lot of corrections, but it isn't - I am just giving you as many ideas and synonyms that should be useful for you.
March 12, 2025
The meanings change little by little.I learned about new English things.Thank you for your kindness!
I passed afinished high school a few days ago.
"A high school" is unnecessary here because you're referring to passing high school in general, not a specific school.
"A few days ago" needs the article "a" before "few" to sound natural.
If you wanted to say you just graduated high school, "finished" is more appropriate
When I gavreceived the passeding message, I was so happy with my mother.
The correct phrase is "received the passing message" since you're talking about getting the notification or news of passing.
"Gave" is incorrect here, as you're not giving the message but receiving it.
Thank youI’m grateful for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.
"I'm grateful" sounds more natural than just "thank you" in this context. It reflects your appreciation for her support more clearly.
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Congratulations to you! I am sure your mother is very proud of you. Keep learning new languages!
March 12, 2025
Thank you so much (T ^ T)
Your words makes me so happy.
I’ll do my best and keep learning hard!
A High school
I passed a high school few days ago.entrance exam a few days ago.¶
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(or: I was accepted into a high school a few days ago. / I passed the entrance exam for a high school a few days ago.)
When I gave passedreceived the message, that I wpas so happy with my mother.sed, I and my mother were so happy.¶
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(or: When we found out that I passed, me and my mother were so happy.)
Thank youI'm grateful for my mother’'s help and, so I will work harder at studying foreign languages harder.
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Well done! 頑張りましょう！
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When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother. When I When I The correct phrase is "received the passing message" since you're talking about getting the notification or news of passing. "Gave" is incorrect here, as you're not giving the message but receiving it. When I gave passed message, I was so happy with my mother. When I was told about/got the results, My mother and I were so happy
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Thank you for my mother’s help and I will study foreign languages harder.
"I'm grateful" sounds more natural than just "thank you" in this context. It reflects your appreciation for her support more clearly.
Thank you for my mother’s help and encourage, I will study foreign languages harder. QUESTION: Besides English, what languages are you studying? Chinese and English? French and English? |
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A High school This sentence has been marked as perfect! A QUESTION: Was it the high school that you once attended? If so, this wording is possible: Passing by my high school |
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I passed a high school few days ago. I passed a high school I "A high school" is unnecessary here because you're referring to passing high school in general, not a specific school. "A few days ago" needs the article "a" before "few" to sound natural. If you wanted to say you just graduated high school, "finished" is more appropriate I passed a high school few days ago. I passed high school few days ago. もし、あなたの高校だったらです: I passed my high school few days ago.¶ Was this in your hometown? If so, perhaps this wording - I passed a high school in my home town few days ago. |
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