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Sept. 26, 2021

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A Happy Day

I told the teacherof Class 4, Mr. Xu that his girl student smoked and show him the footage. He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soon and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl denied it. Furthermore, he can't recognise all his students either. I told him that it was the teacher of Class 1, Ms. Liu, who recognised the girl. Then I told Ms. Liu the incident. She said that she had taught the girl for a year, so she definitely couldn't be wrong.
A class later, I aksed Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman Office. He said that they were asked to be witness of last Friday fight. The boy's father wasn't satisfied with the result, so he came to discuss the fight again. The boy said "My English teacher was just standing there and never helped." Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have been dead. I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-pot, but I still tried my best to stop the fight.
Then I asked my students how many times I had separated the fight. They said two or three times. Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behide me. My students said, who I pulled away were the Nine Grader, not him. I was quite shocked because it was really dagerous, I even did like that. Then I told my students, if they made trouble like this, I would never do a favour. I would just stand and watch, then asked for help. Actually, I was quite afraid at that time. They asked me why I still helped the boy. I said because I was a teacher, I had the responsibility to protect students. As teaching them was boring, but I would still do my best, because I didn't want to feel sorry for myself.
When we were talking the social media, a boy asked to read my diaries again. I showed them the comment of "闹翻天", but they denied it. I emphasized that they always behaved badly. I didn't tell them, one of the boy even couldn't tell my name today.
In the night class, I dictated the 26 letters the four time. To my surprise, several students made a big progress, they all got the full score. The three girls played strip poker included. Last time, a boy got 0, but this time, he got full score. I asked the boy sitting in front of me, he said that he was so afraid to copy the wrong letters again, that he had recognised all the letters.
I praised them on Parents Group. I was so happy for them.

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A Happy Day

I told the teacher of Class 4, Mr. Xu, that his girla female student of his smoked, and showed him the footage.

He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soon after and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl had denied it.

Furthermore, he can't recognise all his students either.

I told him that it was the teacher of Class 1, Ms. Liu, who recognised the girl.

Then I told Ms. Liu about the incident.

She said that she had taught the girl for a year, so she definitely couldn't be wrong.

After the next class later, I aksked Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman Oprincipal's office.

Chairman = 校长?

He said that they were asked to bear witness tof last Friday's fight.

The boy's father wasn't satisfied with the resultschool's actions, so he came to discuss the fight again.

The boy said, "Mmy English teacher was just standing there and never helped."

Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you, he would have been dead.

Alternatively, "Mr. Xu told him, if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have been dead."

I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-potright then and there, but I had still tried my best to stop the fight.

Then, I asked my students how many times I had separatedbroken up the fight.

They said two or three times.

Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behinde me.

Still probably for the best that you did, I think.

My students said, who I that I had pulled away were the Nine Ga ninth grader, not him.

I was quite shocked, because it was really dangerous, I even did like that what I had done.

Then, I told my students, if they made trouble like this, I would never do athem any favours.

I would just stand and watch, and then askedcall for help.

You might have meant "I would just stand and watch them call for help."

ActuaTruthfully, I was quite afraid at that timefearful then.

They asked me why I still helped the boy.

I said it was because I was a teacher, and I had the responsibility to protect students.

As tTeaching them was boring, but I would still do my best, because I didn't want to just stand around and feel sorry for myself.

When we were talking theabout social media, a boy asked to read my diaries again.

I showed them the comment ofabout "闹翻天", but they denied it.

哈哈哈哈

I emphasizsed that they always behaved badly.

Make sure you're consistent in using British spelling.

I didn't tell them, that one of the boy even couldn't tells didn't even know my name today.

In the night class, I dictated the 26 letters for the fourth time.

To my surprise, several students made a biglot of progress, they all got the full score.

The three girls who had played strip poker included.

Connect to previous sentence with comma

Last time, a boy got a 0, but this time, he got full score.

I asked the boy sitting in front of mehim what had changed, he said that he was so afraid to copy the wrong letters again, that he had recognmemorised all the letters.

I praised them oin Pthe parents Ggroup chat.

I was so happy for them.

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Nice writing! Glad the day was a good one overall.

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kiwy

Sept. 26, 2021

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After the next class later, I aksked Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman Oprincipal's office.

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什么的主任?他坐在董事会吗?

A Happy Day

I told the teacher of Class 4, Mr. Xu, that his girlone of his female students had smoked and then show him the footage.

He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soonhortly after and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl denied it.

Furthermore, he can't recognise all his students, either.

I told him that it was the teacher of Class 1, Ms. Liu, who recognised the girl.

Then I told Ms. Liu about the incident.

She said that she had taught the girl for a year, so she definitely couldn't be wrongwas sure of it.

A class lLater, I aksked Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman O's office.

He said that they were asked to be witnesses of last Friday's fight.

The boy's father wasn't satisfied with the result, so he came to discuss the fight again.

The boy said, "My English teacher was just standing there and never helped."

Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have beenhim, he would be dead.

I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-pot, but I still tried my best to stop the fight.

I'm not sure what you mean by on-the-pot

Then I asked my students how many times I had to separated the fight.

They said two or three times.

Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behide me.

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kiwy

Sept. 26, 2021

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I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-pot, but I still tried my best to stop the fight.

on the spot.

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I told the teacherof Class 4, Mr. Xu that his girl student smoked and show him the footage.


I told the teacher of Class 4, Mr. Xu, that his girlone of his female students had smoked and then show him the footage.

I told the teacher of Class 4, Mr. Xu, that his girla female student of his smoked, and showed him the footage.

He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soon and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl denied it.


He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soonhortly after and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl denied it.

He went to talk with the girl, but he came back soon after and asked me to send him the footage, because the girl had denied it.

Furthermore, he can't recognise all his students either.


Furthermore, he can't recognise all his students, either.

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I told him that it was the teacher of Class 1, Ms. Liu, who recognised the girl.


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Then I told Ms. Liu the incident.


Then I told Ms. Liu about the incident.

Then I told Ms. Liu about the incident.

She said that she had taught the girl for a year, so she definitely couldn't be wrong.


She said that she had taught the girl for a year, so she definitely couldn't be wrongwas sure of it.

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A class later, I aksed Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman Office.


A class lLater, I aksked Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman O's office.

After the next class later, I aksked Mr. Xu why so many students in his class went to the Chairman Oprincipal's office.

Chairman = 校长?

He said that they were asked to be witness of last Friday fight.


He said that they were asked to be witnesses of last Friday's fight.

He said that they were asked to bear witness tof last Friday's fight.

The boy's father wasn't satisfied with the result, so he came to discuss the fight again.


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The boy's father wasn't satisfied with the resultschool's actions, so he came to discuss the fight again.

The boy said "My English teacher was just standing there and never helped."


The boy said, "My English teacher was just standing there and never helped."

The boy said, "Mmy English teacher was just standing there and never helped."

Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have been dead.


Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have beenhim, he would be dead.

Mr. Xu told him that if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you, he would have been dead.

Alternatively, "Mr. Xu told him, if the English teacher hadn't helped you, you would have been dead."

I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-pot, but I still tried my best to stop the fight.


I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-pot, but I still tried my best to stop the fight.

I'm not sure what you mean by on-the-pot

I felt ridiculous, and told them it was quite dangerous on-the-potright then and there, but I had still tried my best to stop the fight.

Then I asked my students how many times I had separated the fight.


Then I asked my students how many times I had to separated the fight.

Then, I asked my students how many times I had separatedbroken up the fight.

They said two or three times.


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Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behide me.


Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behide me.

Then I told them what the boy had said, and I regretted protecting him behinde me.

Still probably for the best that you did, I think.

My students said, who I pulled away were the Nine Grader, not him.


My students said, who I that I had pulled away were the Nine Ga ninth grader, not him.

I was quite shocked because it was really dagerous, I even did like that.


I was quite shocked, because it was really dangerous, I even did like that what I had done.

Then I told my students, if they made trouble like this, I would never do a favour.


Then, I told my students, if they made trouble like this, I would never do athem any favours.

I would just stand and watch, then asked for help.


I would just stand and watch, and then askedcall for help.

You might have meant "I would just stand and watch them call for help."

Actually, I was quite afraid at that time.


ActuaTruthfully, I was quite afraid at that timefearful then.

They asked me why I still helped the boy.


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I said because I was a teacher, I had the responsibility to protect students.


I said it was because I was a teacher, and I had the responsibility to protect students.

As teaching them was boring, but I would still do my best, because I didn't want to feel sorry for myself.


As tTeaching them was boring, but I would still do my best, because I didn't want to just stand around and feel sorry for myself.

When we were talking the social media, a boy asked to read my diaries again.


When we were talking theabout social media, a boy asked to read my diaries again.

I showed them the comment of "闹翻天", but they denied it.


I showed them the comment ofabout "闹翻天", but they denied it.

哈哈哈哈

I emphasized that they always behaved badly.


I emphasizsed that they always behaved badly.

Make sure you're consistent in using British spelling.

I didn't tell them, one of the boy even couldn't tell my name today.


I didn't tell them, that one of the boy even couldn't tells didn't even know my name today.

In the night class, I dictated the 26 letters the four time.


In the night class, I dictated the 26 letters for the fourth time.

To my surprise, several students made a big progress, they all got the full score.


To my surprise, several students made a biglot of progress, they all got the full score.

The three girls played strip poker included.


The three girls who had played strip poker included.

Connect to previous sentence with comma

Last time, a boy got 0, but this time, he got full score.


Last time, a boy got a 0, but this time, he got full score.

I asked the boy sitting in front of me, he said that he was so afraid to copy the wrong letters again, that he had recognised all the letters.


I asked the boy sitting in front of mehim what had changed, he said that he was so afraid to copy the wrong letters again, that he had recognmemorised all the letters.

I praised them on Parents Group.


I praised them oin Pthe parents Ggroup chat.

I was so happy for them.


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