Dec. 14, 2020
A happy day
Today, I use the Blue tooth keyboard to write journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everyday, but I feel uncomfortable. Yesterday, it’s extremely cool in our city. Recently, we have a exam that principle of automatic control, so I often go to library to study it. Library is further from our dormitory, probably the distance has two km. I want to eat dinner at 5 p.m., due to the awful climate, I go back the dormitory ahead of time. I and my boyfriend go to the express site to put our one year annual gift that I send he. He like it.
今天我用蓝牙鼠标写这篇日记，昨天我直接用手机写的，感觉不是很舒服。昨天，我们这里很冷，因为要考试了，所以我最近经常去图书馆，图书馆离我们寝室很远，大概有两公里。原来我打算在下午5点半去吃饭，但是走出图书馆之后发现外面很冷，我就提前回了寝室。和我的男朋友一起去取我送给他的一周年礼物，他说感觉很好。
A hHappy dDay
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By “express site” do you mean “post office”?
In English, it’s grammatically correct to put other people before you in a sentence, (“You and I”, “Charles and me”, etc.), although many native speakers often don’t follow this rule.
He likes it.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections! I noticed that you seemed to miss the past tense a lot. I know that this is something that I struggle with in the language I’m learning, and I know that English’s past tense is most more irregular.
Earlier in the passage, you used the word “climate”. “Climate” is the general weather patterns of a certain area for decades, while weather is the temperature, air pressure, etc. that changes on a daily basis.
I hope this helps!
Dec. 15, 2020
I wanted to eat dinner at 5 p.m., but due to the awful climate, I goweather, I went back to the dormitory ahead of time.
Can you explain it? I can't understand '-',thank you.
Dec. 15, 2020
Thank you, I keep studying English everyday.
Dec. 15, 2020
Can you explain it? I can't understand '-',thank you.
I think that that was added by the program.
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Today, I use the Blue tooth keyboard to write journal, while yesterday I use the phone to record everyday, but I feel uncomfortable. Today, I use |
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Yesterday, it’s extremely cool in our city. Yesterday, it |
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Recently, we have a exam that principle of automatic control, so I often go to library to study it. Recently, we ha Most of the time, it’s “an” instead of “a” before a vowel. |
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Library is further from our dormitory, probably the distance has two km.
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I want to eat dinner at 5 p.m., due to the awful climate, I go back the dormitory ahead of time. I wanted to eat dinner at 5 p.m., but due to the awful |
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I and my boyfriend go to the express site to put our one year annual gift that I send he.
By “express site” do you mean “post office”? In English, it’s grammatically correct to put other people before you in a sentence, (“You and I”, “Charles and me”, etc.), although many native speakers often don’t follow this rule. |
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He like it. He likes it. |
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