March 3, 2021
A Hairset
Today, I got my hair cut for the first time in three months. Three months is twice longer than the usual interval, so I'm feeling so refreshed. A barber set my hair with style after cutting, but I can't duplicate the hairstyle at home. I'm reluctant to set my hair in the morning, and if I ride a motorbike the day, my hair will be reset because of a helmet. Therefore, I seldom use hair styling products. My hair is the coolest on a day getting a haircut.
A Hairset
Sorry! I couldn't work out what you meant by hairset.
Today, I got my hair cut for the first time in three months.
I would say "I got a haircut for the first time in three months", but I think that's based on preference.
AThe barber setyled my hair with style after cutting it, but I can't duplicate the hairstylmanage to do the same at home.
Duplicate is a bit unnatural in this context. Also you don't "set... with style", you "style" something.
Therefore, I seldom useSo I hardly use any hair styling products.
Keep it simple. "Therefore" and "seldom" are a bit かたい. "Seldom" is used mainly in formal contexts.
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I've given my corrections to match what other people have already corrected.
I think overall your sentences are quite good, but there are a few places where the tone of your sentences doesn't quite match the context and the formality. Please message me or comment if you have any questions.
I hope this helped!
March 4, 2021
Thank you so much! The differences between synonyms are difficult. Actually, I was taught that "seldom" equals "hardly" in school. I have to learn more through writing and reading.
A Hairset
Can you clarify what you mean by hairset?
Today, I got my hair cut for the first time in three months.
Three months is twice longer than the usual intervalIt's a month and a half overdue, so I'm feeling sopretty refreshed.
A barber setyled my hair with style after cutting it, but I can't seem to duplicate the hairstyle at home.it.
I'm reluctant to set(style, fix, make) my hair in the mornings, andbecause if I ride a motormy bike theat day, my hair will be resetget messed up because of athe helmet.
My hair ilooks the coolest on a daybest after getting a haircut.
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If I wasn't scared to ride a bike, I would definitely take messy hair over not driving a bike :D
March 4, 2021
Thank you for your correction :)
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A Hairset
Can you clarify what you mean by hairset?
Sorry! I couldn't work out what you meant by hairset. |
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Today, I got my hair cut for the first time in three months. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today, I got my hair cut for the first time in three months. I would say "I got a haircut for the first time in three months", but I think that's based on preference. |
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Three months is twice longer than the usual interval, so I'm feeling so refreshed.
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A barber set my hair with style after cutting, but I can't duplicate the hairstyle at home. A barber s
Duplicate is a bit unnatural in this context. Also you don't "set... with style", you "style" something. |
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I'm reluctant to set my hair in the morning, and if I ride a motorbike the day, my hair will be reset because of a helmet. I'm reluctant to |
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Therefore, I seldom use hair styling products.
Keep it simple. "Therefore" and "seldom" are a bit かたい. "Seldom" is used mainly in formal contexts. |
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My hair is the coolest on a day getting a haircut. My hair |
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