Nov. 24, 2020
A Group Presentation
Today, I did a group presentation in my class. My group consisted of three students and we had to make a presentation in 80 minutes. The topic was Japanese, and we talked about Japanese used in papers and variations of Japanese. It was tough to do such a long presentation. Besides, I was anxious about whether the audience was able to be listening to my announcement while my turn because I'm not used to using an online presentation tool and there was no reaction from them. After all, there was no trouble and we did a good presentation (I hope so), so I'm reassured now.
A Group Presentation
Today, I did a group presentation in my class.
My group consisted of three students and we had to make a presentation inthat lasted 80 minutes.
The topic was Japanese, and we talked about Japanese used in papers and variations of Japanese.
This is correct, but it is a little unclear what you mean. Did you present on different dialects of Japanese, or different writing styles or something like that?
It was tough to do such a long presentation.
Besides, I was anxious about whether the audience was able to be listening to my announcement while my turn because I'm not used to using an online presentation toolcould hear me when it was my turn because I'm not used to presenting online, and there was no reaction from them.
After all, there was no trouble and we did a goodIn the end, it seemed to work out, and I hope our presentation (I hope so)went well, so I'm reassured now.
What you wrote was correct, but it sounded a little odd to me, so I rephrased a few things.
Nov. 25, 2020
I presented different writing and pronunciation styles, and misuse of idioms.
Nov. 25, 2020
Oh, I see. Yeah, I would just say that - it is more specific and clearer.
Nov. 25, 2020
Also, congratulations on the 59-day streak! That's really impressive :)
Nov. 26, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Today, I did a group presentation in my class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My group consisted of three students and we had to make a presentation in 80 minutes. My group consisted of three students and we had to make a presentation |
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The topic was Japanese, and we talked about Japanese used in papers and variations of Japanese. The topic was Japanese, and we talked about Japanese used in papers and variations of Japanese. This is correct, but it is a little unclear what you mean. Did you present on different dialects of Japanese, or different writing styles or something like that? |
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It was tough to do such a long presentation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Besides, I was anxious about whether the audience was able to be listening to my announcement while my turn because I'm not used to using an online presentation tool and there was no reaction from them. Besides, I was anxious about whether the audience |
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After all, there was no trouble and we did a good presentation (I hope so), so I'm reassured now.
What you wrote was correct, but it sounded a little odd to me, so I rephrased a few things. |
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