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panconjamon9

July 15, 2025

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a gift to my girlfriend

I don't be good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend is in 6 days and his present don't are ready. She's love make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may will a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervius cause i dont know if really she's love that

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a gift tofor my girlfriend

I don't be'm not good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and his present don't areer gift isn't ready.

She's loves to make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop'm looking for a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may willthis may be a good presengift, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervious cause i dont't really know if really she'sll love that

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Overally good, easy to understand but there are several grammatical mistakes:)

a gift tofor my girlfriend

I don't be?m not good with the gifts, the birthday to m. My girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and hiser present doisn't are ready.

"I haven't bought her present yet" sounds more natural.

She's loves makeing clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I sthopught a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may willight be a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervious because i dont know if she'd really she's lovlike that.

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Good luck finding a present!

I don't be good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend is in 6 days and his present don't are ready.

I'm not very good with gifts. My girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and her presents aren't ready.

She's love make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may will a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervius cause i dont know if really she's love that

She loves to make things out of clay, like fruits, characters or other objects, so I'm shopping for a clay modeling kit and a cutting mat. It seemed like a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervous because I'm not sure if she'll actually love it.

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Solid effort - your sentences are definitely understandable!

a gift to my girlfriend


a gift tofor my girlfriend

a gift tofor my girlfriend

I don't be good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend is in 6 days and his present don't are ready.


I don't be good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend is in 6 days and his present don't are ready.

I'm not very good with gifts. My girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and her presents aren't ready.

I don't be?m not good with the gifts, the birthday to m. My girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and hiser present doisn't are ready.

"I haven't bought her present yet" sounds more natural.

I don't be'm not good with the gifts, the birthday to my girlfriend's birthday is in 6 days and his present don't areer gift isn't ready.

She's love make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may will a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervius cause i dont know if really she's love that


She's love make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may will a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervius cause i dont know if really she's love that

She loves to make things out of clay, like fruits, characters or other objects, so I'm shopping for a clay modeling kit and a cutting mat. It seemed like a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervous because I'm not sure if she'll actually love it.

She's loves makeing clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I sthopught a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may willight be a good present, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervious because i dont know if she'd really she's lovlike that.

She's loves to make clay thigs, like fruits, characters or objects, so I shop'm looking for a kit for clay modeling and a cutting mat, may willthis may be a good presengift, but yesterday we talked and now I'm a little nervious cause i dont't really know if really she'sll love that

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