Jan. 4, 2023
When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was the first experience related to love. You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, sweat hands. But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too. All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth. Now that I lock back it is funny. Now that would never happen. I guess time has made me superficial.
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When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related to love.
You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands (that occur in situations like these).
But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love with him and all my girl matesfriends were too.
All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth/lacking front teeth.
Now that I locok back it is funny.
Now that would never happen (again).
I guess time has made me superficial.
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¡Buen trabajo!
A funny story about my first love
When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related towith love.
You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, the sweaty hands.
But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates were too.
AWe were all crazy for a dude without no frontal teeth.
Now that I locok back it is funny.
NowThat’s something that would never happen to me now, with a guy like that.
I’m assuming, please lmk if this wasn’t what you wanted to say.
I guess time has made me superficial.
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Funny story, made me laugh. Well done.
A funny story about my first love
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Now thatwhen I locok back it is funny.
NowToday, that would never happen.
I guess time has made me superficial.
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You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands.
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Now that I locok back it is funny.
Now, that would never happen.
The comma (,) emphasizes "now."
I guess time has made me superficial.
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Superficial or practical. I guess it's hard to tell them apart. This story is very cute. I enjoyed reading it. Good work!
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But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too.
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