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cristinaaquafina101

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A funny story about my first love

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was the first experience related to love. You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, sweat hands. But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too. All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth. Now that I lock back it is funny. Now that would never happen. I guess time has made me superficial.

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A fFunny sStory about mMy fFirst lLove

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related to love.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands (that occur in situations like these).

But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love with him and all my girl matesfriends were too.

All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth/lacking front teeth.

Now that I locok back it is funny.

Now that would never happen (again).

I guess time has made me superficial.

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¡Buen trabajo!

A funny story about my first love

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related towith love.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, the sweaty hands.

But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates were too.

AWe were all crazy for a dude without no frontal teeth.

Now that I locok back it is funny.

NowThat’s something that would never happen to me now, with a guy like that.

I’m assuming, please lmk if this wasn’t what you wanted to say.

I guess time has made me superficial.

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Funny story, made me laugh. Well done.

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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 4, 2023

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Thaaanks :)

A funny story about my first love

When I was a child, in kKindergarten, I think it was the first experience related toI had of love.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, sweat handy palms.

But he had no teeth for some reason, he had no teeth. (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too.friends were as well.

All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth.

Now thatwhen I locok back it is funny.

NowToday, that would never happen.

I guess time has made me superficial.

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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 4, 2023

1

thank you

A fFunny sStory about mMy fFirst lLove

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

When I was a child, in kKindergarten, I think it was thethat was when I think I had my first experience related to love.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands.

"Sweat" can be a noun or a verb. "Sweaty" is the adjective.

But hHe had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I wasand yet I was still so in love and all my girl mates were, too.

AWe were all crazy for a dude without frontal teeth.

or

We were all crazy for a dude who had no teeth.

Now that I locok back it is funny.

Now, that would never happen.

The comma (,) emphasizes "now."

I guess time has made me superficial.

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Superficial or practical. I guess it's hard to tell them apart. This story is very cute. I enjoyed reading it. Good work!

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cristinaaquafina101

Jan. 4, 2023

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Thank you very much

A funny story about my first love


A fFunny sStory about mMy fFirst lLove

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

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A fFunny sStory about mMy fFirst lLove

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was the first experience related to love.


When I was a child, in kKindergarten, I think it was thethat was when I think I had my first experience related to love.

When I was a child, in kKindergarten, I think it was the first experience related toI had of love.

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related towith love.

When I was a child, in kindergarten, I think it was theI had my first experience related to love.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, sweat hands.


You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands.

"Sweat" can be a noun or a verb. "Sweaty" is the adjective.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, sweat handy palms.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, the sweaty hands.

You know, the butterflies in your stomach, the nervousness, and sweaty hands (that occur in situations like these).

But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too.


But hHe had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I wasand yet I was still so in love and all my girl mates were, too.

But he had no teeth for some reason, he had no teeth. (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates too.friends were as well.

But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love and all my girl mates were too.

But he had no teeth for some reason, (I know it's normal to lose teeth but all of them at once?) even though I was so in love with him and all my girl matesfriends were too.

All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth.


AWe were all crazy for a dude without frontal teeth.

or We were all crazy for a dude who had no teeth.

All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth.

AWe were all crazy for a dude without no frontal teeth.

All crazy for a dude without frontal teeth/lacking front teeth.

Now that I lock back it is funny.


Now that I locok back it is funny.

Now thatwhen I locok back it is funny.

Now that I locok back it is funny.

Now that I locok back it is funny.

Now that would never happen.


Now, that would never happen.

The comma (,) emphasizes "now."

NowToday, that would never happen.

NowThat’s something that would never happen to me now, with a guy like that.

I’m assuming, please lmk if this wasn’t what you wanted to say.

Now that would never happen (again).

I guess time has made me superficial.


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