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Ducky

Dec. 22, 2021

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Today I am going to talk about my favourite fruit. In general, I like all the fruits, for that, always I have thought that they are a gift from the Gods. The fruit that I love is the lychee. It is small, round, and with a red, rough, and slim skin. The inside is white and sweet with a brown bone in the center. The taste is some mixture among pineapple and peach. At the end of year, in december, normally I go to the market of the Boqueria in Barcelona. It is a beautifuy market to walk and buy something, for example lychees.

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A Fruit

Today I am going to talk about my favourite fruit.

In general, I like all the fruits, for that,and I have always I have thought that they awere a gift from the Ggods.

"God" as in the Christian (Jewish, Muslim) God is capitalized. Multiple gods are lowercase.

The fruit that I love is themost is lychee.

It is small, and round, and with a red, rough, and slimthin skin.

"Slim" is pretty much always used to describe a person's physique (=thin).

The inside is white and sweet with a brown bonepit in the center.

TheIt taste is somes like a mixture amongof pineapple and peach.

At the end of the year, in dDecember, I normally I go to the market of the Boqueria market in Barcelona.

It is a beautifuyl market to walk and buy something, for examplethrough and buy goods/food, including lychees.

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Ducky

Dec. 23, 2021

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Thanks for the correction.

In general, I like all the fruits, for that, always I haveI have always thought that they are a gift from the Gods.

The fruit that I love is the lychee.

Can also say "my favorite fruit is lychee"

It is small, round, and with a red, roughbone in the middle, it has a rough exterior, and slim skinterior.

The inside is white and sweet with a brown bone in the center.

Can remove "with a brown bone in the center." if you want since I added it earlier

The taste is some mixture amongof pineapple and peach.

At the end of year, in dDecember, normally I go to the market of the Boqueria market in Barcelona.

Months are always capitalized. Also I think instead of "Boqueria" you meant to write "Boquera", but maybe what you wrote has the right spelling.

It is a beautifuyl market to walk around and buy something, for example lychees.

beautifuy is not a word.

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Ducky

Dec. 23, 2021

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Thanks a lot.

A Fruit


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Today I am going to talk about my favourite fruit.


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In general, I like all the fruits, for that, always I have thought that they are a gift from the Gods.


In general, I like all the fruits, for that, always I haveI have always thought that they are a gift from the Gods.

In general, I like all the fruits, for that,and I have always I have thought that they awere a gift from the Ggods.

"God" as in the Christian (Jewish, Muslim) God is capitalized. Multiple gods are lowercase.

The fruit that I love is the lychee.


The fruit that I love is the lychee.

Can also say "my favorite fruit is lychee"

The fruit that I love is themost is lychee.

It is small, round, and with a red, rough, and slim skin.


It is small, round, and with a red, roughbone in the middle, it has a rough exterior, and slim skinterior.

It is small, and round, and with a red, rough, and slimthin skin.

"Slim" is pretty much always used to describe a person's physique (=thin).

The inside is white and sweet with a brown bone in the center.


The inside is white and sweet with a brown bone in the center.

Can remove "with a brown bone in the center." if you want since I added it earlier

The inside is white and sweet with a brown bonepit in the center.

The taste is some mixture among pineapple and peach.


The taste is some mixture amongof pineapple and peach.

TheIt taste is somes like a mixture amongof pineapple and peach.

At the end of year, in december, normally I go to the market of the Boqueria in Barcelona.


At the end of year, in dDecember, normally I go to the market of the Boqueria market in Barcelona.

Months are always capitalized. Also I think instead of "Boqueria" you meant to write "Boquera", but maybe what you wrote has the right spelling.

At the end of the year, in dDecember, I normally I go to the market of the Boqueria market in Barcelona.

It is a beautifuy market to walk and buy something, for example lychees.


It is a beautifuyl market to walk around and buy something, for example lychees.

beautifuy is not a word.

It is a beautifuyl market to walk and buy something, for examplethrough and buy goods/food, including lychees.

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