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Claudio

May 25, 2025

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Email a friend

Hi John,
I’m writing you to arrange the journey planned for tomorrow. I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airport. Remember the limit weight of the baggage, maximum 23 kg. By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, traveling for 14 hours in an airplane might be boring!
See ya tomorrow…

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Email to a fFriend

Hi John, I’m writing you to arrange the journey planned for tomorrow.

I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airportthe airport at 10:00 am.

The other way is fine too but this is a bit more natural

Remember the limit weighweight limit of the baggage, maximum 23 kg.

By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, t. Traveling for 14 hours in an airplane might be boring!

See ya tomorrow…

EA email to a friend

Starting with the verb sounds like a command.

Hi John, I’m writing you to arrange the journey planned for tomorrow.

I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airportthe airport by 10:00 am.

Remember the limit weight of the baggage, maximumDon’t forget the weight limit. We can’t have any baggage heavier than 23 kg.

“Don’t forget” sounds slightly friendlier than, “remember.” ¡Yo tampoco sé porque!

By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, t. Traveling for 14 hours in an airplane mightcan be boring!

See yaou tomorrow!

“Ya” sounds so informal that it sort of clashes with the rest of the writing, which is more of a professional tone. Ending messages with exclamation points subtly signals a friendly tone too.

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This looks pretty good and clear. ¡Buena suerte!

Hi John, I’m writing you to arrange the journey planned for tomorrow.


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I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airport.


I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airportthe airport by 10:00 am.

I’ll pick you up tomorrow at 08:00 am, because we need to arrive at 10:00 am at the airportthe airport at 10:00 am.

The other way is fine too but this is a bit more natural

Remember the limit weight of the baggage, maximum 23 kg.


Remember the limit weight of the baggage, maximumDon’t forget the weight limit. We can’t have any baggage heavier than 23 kg.

“Don’t forget” sounds slightly friendlier than, “remember.” ¡Yo tampoco sé porque!

Remember the limit weighweight limit of the baggage, maximum 23 kg.

By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, traveling for 14 hours in an airplane might be boring!


By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, t. Traveling for 14 hours in an airplane mightcan be boring!

By the way, charge your laptop and download a good movie to watch during the flight, t. Traveling for 14 hours in an airplane might be boring!

Email a friend


EA email to a friend

Starting with the verb sounds like a command.

Email to a fFriend

See ya tomorrow…


See yaou tomorrow!

“Ya” sounds so informal that it sort of clashes with the rest of the writing, which is more of a professional tone. Ending messages with exclamation points subtly signals a friendly tone too.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A friend email


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