Aug. 3, 2023
A fresh harvest
This morning. I cut off a winter melon and a loofah from my garden. They are incredibly fresh and I even took a photo to celebrate my reward. The homegrown products can't be matched by anything bought from a supermarket. According to Traditional Chinese Medicine theory, both of them are recognized with medical properties; winter melon can be for dehumidification and loofah is good for phlegm dispelling.
I believe we can't eat anything too much regardless of how good they are, I will never forget I once had eaten too much fresh raw celery from my garden which made me diagnosed with breast hyperplasia. I once wrote this terrible and embarrassing experience on this site.
We made tasty dishes "winter melon with shrimp" and "minced meat with loofah" in the afternoon. It's part of a casual and leisurely rural lifestyle I really enjoy.
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The first letter of all the title's nouns, verbs, adjetives, and adverbs is capitalized in English.
This morning.,
I cut offup a winter melon and a loofah from my garden.
"To cut off" wouldn't be used in this context; if you wanted to say that you took them from your garden, you could say you "harvested" them.
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The hHomegrown productse can't be matched by anything bought from a supermarket.
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I once wrotepreviously wrote about this terrible and embarrassing experience on this site.
We made the tasty dishes "wWinter mMelon with sShrimp" and "mMinced mMeat with lLoofah" in the afternoon.
It's part of a casual and leisurely rural lifestyle that I really enjoy.
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Great job! Just a few corrections!
Aug. 4, 2023
Thank you for your time on the corrections! :-)
A fFresh hHarvest.
Important words in a title start with a capital letter.
This morning.
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I cut off a winter melon and a loofah from my garden.
They are incredibly fresh and I even took a photo to celebrate my reward.
The hHomegrown products can't be matched by anything bought from a supermarket.
Don't need "The" here. You are introducing "homegrown products" for the first time.
According to Traditional Chinese Medicine theory, both of them are recognized withto have medicinal properties; winter melon can be for dehumidification and loofah is good for phlegm dispelling phlegm.
I am not sure what you mean by "dehumidification".
I believe we cashouldn't eat anything too muchtoo much of any one thing regardless of how good they are,it is; I will never forget that I once had eaten too much fresh raw celery from my garden which made meresulted in me being diagnosed with breast hyperplasia.
I once wrote about this terrible and embarrassing experience on this site.
You "write about" an experience.
We made tasty dishes of "winter melon with shrimp" and "minced meat with loofah" in the afternoon.
It's part of a casual and leisurely rural lifestyle I really enjoy.
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Good work. Certainly some less common words there. Sadly I have never tried either of these two vegetables. Don't think we have the climate for them here. Closest I would get to a loofah is in the bath.
Aug. 4, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
Aug. 4, 2023
According to Traditional Chinese Medicine theory, both of them are recognized withto have medicinal properties; winter melon can be for dehumidification and loofah is good for phlegm dispelling phlegm.
This is a big question. Here I try to answer. "Humidity" or "dampness" is recognized as one of six bad influences, which affects the human body's normal function. According to the Traditional Chinese Medicine concept, In the late summer or called the fifth season, people generally have more humidity in body, so need to reduce it.
Aug. 4, 2023
This is a big question. Here I try to answer. "Humidity" or "dampness" is recognized as one of six bad influences, which affects the human body's normal function. According to the Traditional Chinese Medicine concept, In the late summer or called the fifth season, people generally have more humidity in body, so need to reduce it.
I see. There is no real way to translate it in a way most English speakers would understand as we lack the cultural context to do so. It would need a brief explanation of the concept to be understandable to someone outside the Chinese cultural milieu.
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They are incredibly fresh and I even took a photo to celebrate my reward. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They are incredibly fresh and I even took a photo to celebrate |
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The homegrown products can't be matched by anything bought from a supermarket.
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It's part of a casual and leisurely rural lifestyle I really enjoy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's part of a casual and leisurely rural lifestyle that I really enjoy. |
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